Blue Ray - Hawaii (In progress, need your op...)

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Posted by soundrush on Aug-09-2007 09:09:

Blue Ray - Hawaii (In progress, need your op...)

Jojojo Guys ,

i've been working on this track for a couple of hours, its kind of a house track with some old shool sounding pads, layd back hook and stuff.. tried to do something different from my usual style and producing was realy fun so far but now im lacking a bit of ideas...

... so your suggestions are warmly welcome...

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and pleassssse tell me your opinion..

Posted by teknasia on Aug-09-2007 10:07:

I love it!
Kick and percussion reminds me of a markus schulz' remix of Jewel - Intuition.

Nice flow also. Keep me updated about the progress

greetz

Vylix

Posted by soundrush on Aug-09-2007 11:32:

thanks mate, glad you like it ....

i will keep the thread updated with the track's progress

Posted by Ghazala on Aug-09-2007 13:52:

Wow :-D I like that... nice housy beats! I'd like to hear a bit more beachy sounds on it - all in all not bad

Posted by Rinster on Aug-09-2007 13:53:

sounds good, wouldnt mind a go at a remix

what software do you use?

Posted by soundrush on Aug-09-2007 18:37:

thanks guys,

im using fruityloops, synth sounds were made with vanguard except of the hook, that was made with albino.

wouldnt mind you doing a remix but lemme finish first

Posted by Rinster on Aug-09-2007 19:17:

quote:
Originally posted by soundrush
thanks guys,

im using fruityloops, synth sounds were made with vanguard except of the hook, that was made with albino.

wouldnt mind you doing a remix but lemme finish first

cool man, sent the fruity pack my way when its finished!

cheers man

Posted by avengie on Aug-09-2007 20:44:

everything is excellent except i feel something weird about the bass.... dont know what .... is it too warm?? maybe i guess it is good tho... very nice stuff.....

Cheers

Posted by expanded on Aug-10-2007 09:07:

Nice track, has potential.

Didnt like how you went from single note to chords tho, the build up melody sounds a bit weak when it's not in chords.

Work with a solid build up to release in climax with that legato/portamento like synth sound you had.

The filter effect on the beats gets a bit boring after a while too, just drop it after a while and build up with more percs or something.

Good luck!

Posted by nhibberd on Aug-10-2007 21:27:

heya,

thanks for the review, just returning a review here for you.

- Brilliant kick, nice and deep
- Nice deep bassline too
- cool fx
- pads later on have a little too much low end, conflicts with the bass and kick
- funky beat, great stuff, did you use loops or not?
- melody sounds more like it should fit with an alternating key in the bassline, try kicking it up 3 semitones here and there or something
- click on the lead needs working on, typical vanguard stuff that click. can be helped with a de-clicked.

great!

CU

Nick

Posted by Nick_E on Aug-11-2007 15:39:

you're off to a great start, nice sounds and well put together. Though, this track is just BEGGING for a proper bassline. You should try throwing on a progressive type of bassline, reference lemon 8 tracks. Check out my tune in the forum: "Nick E - Event Horizon"

Posted by rqpeyruxvg on Aug-13-2007 19:27:

Love it, finish it! not much to diss here at all!

Posted by Akia on Aug-14-2007 18:13:

Oh, yes! Really nice, really!

Posted by -_1_--Ben--_1_- on Sep-22-2007 11:31:

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