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Gabriel Cazali - Semper Fi (original mix)

Gabriel Cazali - Semper Fi (original mix)
hey whats up, am new in this forum, am from guatemala
i want it to show you a track that am working on it right now with Alex hentze, a huge upcomming producer.
so here is the first vers�on of this track

hope you can tell me what you think

www.myspace.com/gabrielcazali

cool bass man.. try tweaking it up a bit
i like the flow

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Originally posted by Leon Oziel cool bass man.. try tweaking it up a bit i like the flow

thanks
Albino 3 rulez

any one else?

yeahh, nice track u have to send it to labels right now, good job,

Bebop.

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Originally posted by djbebop yeahh, nice track u have to send it to labels right now, good job, Bebop.

thanks bebop !!!

i will send it to neuroscience for shure

any one else?

alright Gabriel lets see what we got here:

if you're going to have a stacatto pad, put something legato behind it so when it moves, it's not a change in atmosphere but a change in key. make sense?

bassline fits well, kick seems a bit over driven but maybe that was intentional? it works, just expected a lil different

lead is quite pretty -- i would put an analyzer on the bassline and see where in the mid range its frequencies lie and then put an analyzer on the lead, i have a feeling they are both hitting the 1khz-2.5khz area kinda hard, maybe try and eq one higher or lower to see if the lead/bassline breathes more.

other than that, this is quite good, keep up the good work

A

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Originally posted by Zombie0729 alright Gabriel lets see what we got here: if you're going to have a stacatto pad, put something legato behind it so when it moves, it's not a change in atmosphere but a change in key. make sense? bassline fits well, kick seems a bit over driven but maybe that was intentional? it works, just expected a lil different lead is quite pretty -- i would put an analyzer on the bassline and see where in the mid range its frequencies lie and then put an analyzer on the lead, i have a feeling they are both hitting the 1khz-2.5khz area kinda hard, maybe try and eq one higher or lower to see if the lead/bassline breathes more. other than that, this is quite good, keep up the good work A

thanks Anthony, i have to admit that i only make the track on orion, render and thats all i do, no mastering process or anything like that.
thanks for the really good advice

what's orion? i'm guessing like cheap monitors or something -- regarldess, slap on some headphones and take a listen, you should be able to hear the eq the track needs(although i don't recommend using headphones for eq purposes) and EQ'ing is not a form of mastering... you want that stuff taken care of before you master!

good luck

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Originally posted by Zombie0729 what's orion? i'm guessing like cheap monitors or something -- regarldess, slap on some headphones and take a listen, you should be able to hear the eq the track needs(although i don't recommend using headphones for eq purposes) and EQ'ing is not a form of mastering... you want that stuff taken care of before you master! good luck

no men..... orion its the software that i use to produce
http://www.synapse-audio.com/

and no, i will never use headphones,
and for shure, let me work on my EQ and post it later.
thanks again really

the track really seems to lack direction. i like the sounds you used in it though.

i prefer tracks that have a lot of drive and fullness i think you could add more low end to this. a sub bass would work well.

i like the sounds but it does get repetitive after a while try adding new things and taking other things out.

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Originally posted by sterilis a sub bass would work well. try adding new things and taking other things out.

oh thanks for this!!!!
we will make some changes to it, in the new version
thx !

the sub bass its a good idea :P !!!

any one else?

Nice track, really digging the synth at around 3:00 and how the track blows up after that. Take these guys' advice, go polish it, give promos to a few DJs (this totally sounds like a track Santiago Nino will play), and submit it to labels. I'm sure you'll get it signed

Nice to hear quality EDM productions from my beloved Guatemala

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Originally posted by woscar99 Nice track, really digging the synth at around 3:00 and how the track blows up after that. Take these guys' advice, go polish it, give promos to a few DJs (this totally sounds like a track Santiago Nino will play), and submit it to labels. I'm sure you'll get it signed Nice to hear quality EDM productions from my beloved Guatemala

thanks men !
and yes! allready give it to santiago he like it
but like everyone here agree, needs more work, EQ and some touches, but thanks, will post the final version soon

and men if u wanna hear some nice national music , check alex hentze
http://www.myspace.com/alexhentze

AMAZING.....

Your Track is nice... but not to long?? melodies are good, percs and bassline too.......


we invite you to comment our remix Energy Reflect vs. Arctic Moon - Cold Planet..

Best wishes

nice punchy kick.. nice warm pads.. yeah maybe a second (More bassy) bassline to have it run along to keep it more in balance.. just a suggestion. nice melodies.. maybe try to put some arpeggios in the song.. the second melody is pretty cool to but try to use some more vst's in the same time only makes it better. really like it cool tune. just a few touches

added you to myspace!

Excellent man. Nice timbres and melody really catches my attention. I want to eat the bassline lol

Interesting name for the song, also caught my attention

thank you all !!!!!
am glad you all like it really.....
and before i finish semper fi, i will upload "sky high" my new track.


thanks again ppl

yeah, am gladd u like it !

I like the pads and the bassline progression is cool. The guitar sounding melody is great. The arp that comes in after the break, not so great.
I think you should add a higher rolling bassline, it would add alot of drive to the track.
The track has great potential, it just needs more variation.

I enjoyed this, bass line perhaps a little weak but I am listening on headphones. Like the pad. Overall sounds are well balanced. I also like the sounds you've used. Not a peak time banging track but a good one for the 11pm slot.

Good stuff

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Originally posted by G-Con I enjoyed this, bass line perhaps a little weak but I am listening on headphones. Like the pad. Overall sounds are well balanced. I also like the sounds you've used. Not a peak time banging track but a good one for the 11pm slot. Good stuff

yeah thanks men ! glad u like it


well am just post my new track, hope u all can hear it

http://www.tranceaddict.com/forums/...7&forumid=74&s=

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