[Uplifting Trance] Sterilis - Last Chance ''first track in a few months ;-)''

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Posted by sterilis on Oct-03-2007 19:35:

[Uplifting Trance] Sterilis - Last Chance ''first track in a few months ;-)''

this is my first track in 4 months. took me a while to get back into producing when i returned from ibiza as i forgot alot stuff in production.

let me know your opinions on this one as i cant judge myself at the minute

Artist: Sterilis
Title: Last Chance
Style: Uplifting Trance
BPM: 140

MYSPACE

Thanks

Posted by Sunclyder on Oct-03-2007 19:42:

8-)

heey!!

your track is not finished...

is good idea, but after whole... not energy..
maybe you must add a fx, change samples..

best wishes

i invite you to comment Energy Reflect vs. Arctic Moon - Cold Planet rmx :-)

Sunclyder & T-RAVEL
-- united minds --

greetzky

Posted by 3F05Q on Oct-03-2007 21:06:

I like the overall direction of the track, definately!

The lead is a bit harsh in comparison to everything else, however. By that I mean it seems to be dry in comparison to everything else and therefore doesn't fit into the mix for me. Perhaps some filter movement on it to make it less repetitious.

Diggin' the beats man!

Posted by sterilis on Oct-03-2007 21:38:

thanks for the comments

the track isnt finished still have to sort out the breakdown and the part coming out of it. was hoping for some help with that

what lead sounds harsh?

cheers

Posted by Subtle on Oct-03-2007 22:06:

4 months.. thats alot ^^

Some harsh plucks u got there.. gets a bit too much, nice drive in the track.. i like the melody after the break.. and i think it comes together nicely.

Posted by Rinster on Oct-03-2007 22:55:

man youve improved a lot.. loving this!! especially that "creepy ghost fx" on the background.. maybe turn up the volume of your pads a bit more.. and maybe a sencond arp when the melody comes in? just a suggestion.. Qlimax is very cool maybe it could have been introduced a bit different though..

cool tune man, your getting a lot better.. and i really mean that.

Posted by G. Cazali on Oct-03-2007 23:59:

ok...
at the start i think it should be more friendlymix...
the main melody.... the notes are good, but the synth i really dont like it, or meabe try longer notes.
the bassline ok good, but i think you should try something new, thats the bassline i hear in every uplifting tune

i really dont like uplifting trance, but your track its pretty good, with a little more work on it, you should send it to some labels.

Posted by 3F05Q on Oct-04-2007 02:29:

harsh was a bad word to use... but the pluck/short-note-duration lead. It stands out a bit too much. Melody is fine, but it could use some reverb and/or stereo delay.

Guess it's the one that is present during hte first half of the track.

Posted by sterilis on Oct-04-2007 13:41:

quote:
Originally posted by G. Cazali
ok...
at the start i think it should be more friendlymix...

its a sample not the full track

quote:

the main melody.... the notes are good, but the synth i really dont like it, or meabe try longer notes.
the bassline ok good, but i think you should try something new, thats the bassline i hear in every uplifting tune

i really dont like uplifting trance, but your track its pretty good, with a little more work on it, you should send it to some labels.

thats the type of bassline that suits the label im signed to. thanks for the review though.

quote:
Originally posted by Rinster

man youve improved a lot.. loving this!! especially that "creepy ghost fx" on the background.. maybe turn up the volume of your pads a bit more.. and maybe a sencond arp when the melody comes in? just a suggestion.. Qlimax is very cool maybe it could have been introduced a bit different though..

cool tune man, your getting a lot better.. and i really mean that.

thanks for the review mate. yea i have to work on the climax, not too keen on it myself.

Posted by Equos on Oct-04-2007 17:51:

Great track, loving the atmosphere and all the details you've added. Agree about the climax build-up but otherwise a solid job. Nice work!

Equos

Posted by Nery on Oct-04-2007 18:57:

Yeah, it's a nice track :-), lovin' the atmosphere.

Keep up the good job mate

Posted by sterilis on Oct-06-2007 14:02:

thanks for the reviews guys !!

Posted by sterilis on Oct-06-2007 14:02:

thanks for the reviews guys !!

Posted by RickyM on Oct-06-2007 15:33:

Hey Barry, I notice your sound is getting clearer, your mixing skills must be getting better...I like the drive in this track, and the melody is quite good, if a little generic. I would try something else with the bassline maybe, it's a little over-used.

Posted by Eldritch on Oct-07-2007 14:17:

You've definately improved from what I can remember.
Good percs and atmosphere. The melody is great. The pluck could be softer, it stands out too much. The biggest flaw is the bassline, I agree with RickyM that it's a little overused.

Posted by Bren-F on Oct-07-2007 17:42:

Solid track overall.
Nice break & build up. But I am really not liking that pluck sound you are using. It (IMO) sounds far too dry for the rest of the track. Using a softer, more interesting synth for that melody would add loads to the track.

Keep it up

Posted by sterilis on Oct-08-2007 22:22:

thanks for the feedback. i changed the pluck as i felt it was out of palce also. keeping the bassline though

working on the final version of it.

thanks for the input.

Posted by soundrush on Oct-09-2007 07:34:

yo Barry, nice to see you got a new song.

i`ll listen when i come home this evening. havent got the chance to get my internet running on dorm now.

Posted by Akia on Oct-09-2007 18:18:

Love the fx�s and effects! Nice clear sound and good kick. A really good job, Barry!

Takere!

Akia

Posted by sterilis on Oct-10-2007 14:55:

thanks akia