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Posted by Khayat on Oct-08-2007 01:06:

N00b producer - 1st project

Hey everyone this is my first project its juts a 3 min sample and I need some comments please on the structure itself not the mixing mastering etc.As I said b4 Im new to producing so I dont know if this is good or not so im relying on ur comments
I like this track (4 my experience its a big step forward) so Ineed ur comments to complete it
thank you all
PSsomething is missing in this track dont know what it needs a melody or sound here and and an effect there )
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Posted by canadian didjer on Oct-08-2007 08:47:

hey there how are you?
bleh... here goes

You've got alot setup here... this is pretty kickin. the bassline, although nice, could be maybe deeper (ie: boost the <90Hz on the EQ). this is your first? nice... mine really sucked.

there honestly isn't alot to say here.... it's very nice for a first track posted. you must have had experience with other music first, is there any?

Posted by Khayat on Oct-08-2007 12:58:

hehehe
Well some Hipop some Rock etc but this is my first completed track I mean the first project that looked like a track not just some kicks and some claps heehee

Posted by canadian didjer on Oct-08-2007 16:59:

that sounded really nice. I'm guessing it came from the rock influence :P

Posted by Khayat on Oct-08-2007 19:15:

thank u dear im really motivated now to continuo

Posted by mark_gg_daniels on Oct-12-2007 16:52:

hey man - this is fukin wiked for a first time, you should hear my earliest stuff - my god its terrible.

honestly, if this is early stuff than you got an amazing future ahead of you.

Really advanced techniques youre using such as the drum rolls, and the reverse cymbals into the breakdowns etc.... love the brakdown, great way it comes out of the brakedown, with those teasing kicks, than the drum roll.

suggestion would be to automate the filters so the main melodys 'rise' into a banging crescendo (that all trancers love) - but of course these are only suggestions, and everyone is different.

what software you using to make this?

Posted by PDM on Oct-12-2007 19:50:

Re: N00b producer - 1st project

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Originally posted by Khayat
Hey everyone this is my first project its juts a 3 min sample and I need some comments please on the structure itself not the mixing mastering etc.As I said b4 Im new to producing so I dont know if this is good or not so im relying on ur comments
I like this track (4 my experience its a big step forward) so Ineed ur comments to complete it
thank you all
PSsomething is missing in this track dont know what it needs a melody or sound here and and an effect there )
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Hey mate, can you upload to sendspace? right clicking is not working here, and left clicking downloads it automatically to the music player, and I got no speakers here.

Posted by Leniu on Oct-13-2007 01:56:

very nice for a first song, i tihnk u need a louder kick and snare as well as more (or louder) hats

Posted by DJ Blitzkrieg on Oct-13-2007 02:15:

Haha, I seriously doubt this is your first song. I can definitely tell you have some experience. I love the drum roll in your beat. Sounds great, IMO. A little critique though. Your chords at the end are too simple in their rhythm. Try to work towards something a little more catchy. Other than that you got a good sense for percs.

Posted by Khayat on Oct-15-2007 14:57:

hehehehe I Swear its the first completed track Some TA users know this cauz the people who help me here are allot (Thank you all)
Anyways i got ableton live & in Mai 07
The software is Ableton live
My keyboard is Roland Sh 201
As u can see all I dont have any musical experience Im doing some music theory right now (U can see this from the melodies so simple but some people told me this is trance and thats ow it should be)
Dont know I left the comments to you and THANK you all for ahving time to hear the sample I will up again
Thnksss

Posted by Khayat on Oct-15-2007 18:46:

Paaaalm !!!!!!
Thanks maaaaan

Posted by Khayat on Oct-17-2007 14:44:

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Posted by mark_gg_daniels on Oct-17-2007 15:06:

hey - like youre tune, i think the kicks too low though to be honest.

and i think you should make more of that cool trumpety sounding thing in the breakdown.

cool

Posted by Khayat on Oct-17-2007 20:05:

thnx man im working right now one some new sound to make it more melodic but it will take much time as im not Andy moor here I will upload the updates soon

Posted by Chris Crossland on Oct-18-2007 03:08:

This is really good! Better than my crap and i been doing it for about 2 years lolol. I really like the melody and sounds. I'd like to make a remix. I have ableton live but i dont really use it, software came with my midi keyboard! Can you send project files like in FLS? If so im down for a remix!

Posted by liefovegas on Oct-18-2007 04:59:

Really a really good 1st or second or hell... well go as high as ten Nice work on the arrangement and synth work is good. All valid complaints about bass and drums and previously listed but easily fixed and shiftred into a great production. Synths are all really good sounding. I would have to agree on the suggestion on automation, but again simple task to fix. I think you have a really good taste of sequencing for this to be your first finished production and I hope you have a great time producting electronic dance music in the future!

Posted by Khayat on Oct-19-2007 01:55:

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Latest Guys I think its 80-90% done
need comments please not sure about the latest updates.I left the areas where I updated most clear in the sample
thanks once again for you all
And pleasse leave all ur Mixing/Mastering comments as I will do this at last cauz I don't have monitors but i will rent a studio maybe if it deserves !!
I did all this with TDK headphones

Posted by Khayat on Oct-19-2007 23:52:

None listened??