TranceAddict Forums (www.tranceaddict.com/forums)
- Music Producers Promotion
-- [Pure Techno] Rinster - Your Mine (Original Mix) - [Full 320Kbps]
[Pure Techno] Rinster - Your Mine (Original Mix) - [Full 320Kbps]
hey guys, its been a while since ive composed my "own" track.. ive been remixing a lot lately.. anyway this tune was made for a special girl..
and she absolutly loved it !! which is a good thing haha
hope you all like it! and feedback on your opinions would be really appreciated.
thanks all & keep it real,
Rinster.
Rinster - Your Mine (Original Mix) - (Full 320Kbps)
[[ LINK REMOVED ]]
Sweet rythmic mayhem! I don't listen to much techno, but I am learning to appreciate it slowely.
Your piece has some phat hats, albeit a bassline that is somewhat trancy! Techno not having an off-beat bassline is more an exception than a rule, so I'll not nit-pick there.
All in all, it's a spaz-tastic production with acid twerks and beakers that seem both hard as nails and also carrying that robotic groove dominate in techno. The reso-synth riff was definately elevated when the last pad dominated the piece.
Keep up the good work.
Nice track man, I like the undertones and the transitions. Was bobbing away listening to it.
You should start to compile a album...you're starting to have enough tracks for it and the quality is certainly right.
TN
Check your PM's!
This is friggin good mate and im not too big on techno. Let me get that pack and i'll Crossland it lulz!
Title should be "You're Mine" Unless you are taking about a Mine is in the underground exploding device, which I doubt you are.
mr rinster
lets chek your track.........
dont like that bassline (i think the synth its the main problem)
percs are really good
some nice fxs you got here
not my fav from you
hope u can chek my track, sky high
cya
the bass is too boomy. need to high pass that rumble out.
i see your fond of the vengeance vec loops in this
first melody comes in but that bass is too overpowering to concentrate on it.
like the ideas you have floating about in it but sort the bass out for my sake 
Really good percs, though i'm not a fan of the bassline.
Keep it up man
Not trying to be nasty, but I thought this was quite amateurish; I was surprised after seeing all the good comments.
I didn't find the melodies engaging at all, thought they were quite simple, and though it's a matter of opinion, I didn't like any of the synths much.
Agree with the others though, the percs are ace, though I think they could use some more mid, they are quite swishy and don't have much depth.
Finally, I wouldn't call this techno at all. A least not in the detroit sense. Hard techno perhaps (as differentiated from hardcore techno/gabba)?
| quote: |
| Originally posted by B_man Sweet rythmic mayhem! I don't listen to much techno, but I am learning to appreciate it slowely. Your piece has some phat hats, albeit a bassline that is somewhat trancy! Techno not having an off-beat bassline is more an exception than a rule, so I'll not nit-pick there. All in all, it's a spaz-tastic production with acid twerks and beakers that seem both hard as nails and also carrying that robotic groove dominate in techno. The reso-synth riff was definately elevated when the last pad dominated the piece. Keep up the good work. |
| quote: |
| Originally posted by trancenation82 Nice track man, I like the undertones and the transitions. Was bobbing away listening to it. You should start to compile a album...you're starting to have enough tracks for it and the quality is certainly right. TN |
| quote: |
| Originally posted by gwrmarines Check your PM's! This is friggin good mate and im not too big on techno. Let me get that pack and i'll Crossland it lulz! |
| quote: |
| Originally posted by epdarks Title should be "You're Mine" Unless you are taking about a Mine is in the underground exploding device, which I doubt you are. |
| quote: |
| Originally posted by G. Cazali dont like that bassline (i think the synth its the main problem) percs are really good some nice fxs you got here not my fav from you hope u can chek my track, sky high cya |
| quote: |
| Originally posted by sterilis the bass is too boomy. need to high pass that rumble out. i see your fond of the vengeance vec loops in this first melody comes in but that bass is too overpowering to concentrate on it. like the ideas you have floating about in it but sort the bass out for my sake |
you got good ears my friend
thanks for leaving a reply mate appreciate it! | quote: |
| Originally posted by Fait Really good percs, though i'm not a fan of the bassline. Keep it up man |
| quote: |
| Originally posted by Beat Blog Not trying to be nasty, but I thought this was quite amateurish; I was surprised after seeing all the good comments. I didn't find the melodies engaging at all, thought they were quite simple, and though it's a matter of opinion, I didn't like any of the synths much. Agree with the others though, the percs are ace, though I think they could use some more mid, they are quite swishy and don't have much depth. Finally, I wouldn't call this techno at all. A least not in the detroit sense. Hard techno perhaps (as differentiated from hardcore techno/gabba)? |
thanks for being so kind to leave a post though! and ill keep your comments in mind!
Ive left a review to the following = Bman, G. Cazali & Fait.. i couldnt find a thread of the others.. if you post a tune remind me by pm to leave you some feedback, and ill return asap.
cheers,
Rinster.
Anybody Else?
Oh... I'll give it a whirl...
I got bit by the VEC monster straight off. I'd suggest treating that initial loop. Gate it or something, and that noise sweep, I'd suggest making your own, since they're not that difficult. Sub bass is a bit droning. Perhaps some gating or sidechaining and a beefier kick to give the low end a bit more character.
Everything else gets the thumbs up... honest. I think the screaming lead is fitting and has the perfect amount of delay/reverb on it. I also like the occasional pitch bend up.
Good energy, and I like your avatar!
Hit my latest up (in red.)
Hi Rinster,
The first thing I noticed is the Bass has some problems with the low end, you should cut off some freqs that are creating some rumble.
I would change those hats for other Loop, or one less popular, and with a sound less looped .
I like the overall groove, I will tell you something I tell to everyone, try to make wider your stereo image, that will allow your overall mix to breath alot, so all will sound clearer.
Maybe this is just personal taste, but the overall mix is a bit too wet for me, I would try to use less reverb.
The second half is pretty good, I inmidiatly imagined some Disco in Berlin with alot of lights flashing, nice groove.
It has some flaws, but the overall idea is really good, above second half .
Kopi =o.
Love the percs, proper slammin techno they are.
That sub bass is huge! Not keen on the off beat bass that comes in. The harsh FX sounds work great. The builds you create are excellent.
For me good techno is all about the percussion and you've nailed it so well done!
Powered by: vBulletin
Copyright © 2000-2021, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.