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Posted by MrJiveBoJingles on Feb-11-2008 11:00:

JBJ - "Veto" [Full track -- 320 Kbps] [Trance]

JBJ - "Veto" [permanent link] [raceriv.com; 19 MB] -- 8:26, 125 bpm, C Minor

Turn it up good and loud, and listen. Then tell me what you think.

This is the first complete song I've done in a long time, and the first one I've posted on TA, as far as I can remember. Comments and suggestions on all aspects of production are welcome.


Posted by Fuxzz on Feb-11-2008 23:22:

I like the atmosphere. Its a little bit thin, but keep the good work up


Posted by MrJiveBoJingles on Feb-11-2008 23:41:

quote:
Originally posted by Dreamtea
I like the atmosphere. Its a little bit thin, but keep the good work up

Thanks.

You're right that I need to work on making my productions "fuller."


Posted by varun on Feb-12-2008 06:21:

Could you pl. upload as sendspace or other?
Thanks.


Posted by MrJiveBoJingles on Feb-12-2008 06:51:

Here you go:

http://www.sendspace.com/file/dntgze


Posted by varun on Feb-12-2008 07:22:

Contrary to what others have said I beg to differ.
Less is always more and your track does sound quite full, there's enough going on and any additions on top might spoil the flow of the track, which is what it has going for it right now.

I guess you could throw in some extra pads or so, but not really necessary.

The only thing is the levels are far too low, bring them up a bit!
Mixdown seems fine though, although the kick could be raised a notch i guess.

Good job!


Posted by MrJiveBoJingles on Feb-12-2008 14:50:

quote:
Originally posted by varun
Contrary to what others have said I beg to differ.
Less is always more and your track does sound quite full, there's enough going on and any additions on top might spoil the flow of the track, which is what it has going for it right now.

I guess you could throw in some extra pads or so, but not really necessary.

The only thing is the levels are far too low, bring them up a bit!
Mixdown seems fine though, although the kick could be raised a notch i guess.

Good job!

Thanks!

I have some clashing frequencies right now and they're preventing me from getting my levels any higher. I need to find out which elements are interfering with each other and apply the proper EQ to them. Going to work on that in the next few days.


Posted by MrJiveBoJingles on Feb-12-2008 22:12:

I did some EQing and was able to lift up the volume on the whole track, plus I played with the levels on the percussion and made the highs a little louder relative to the rest of the track. Sounds a bit clearer to me. Here's the new SendSpace link:

http://www.sendspace.com/file/2u16vq


Posted by Fuxzz on Feb-12-2008 22:31:

Not bad, everything sounds much more clearer. Good work with the percs


Posted by MrJiveBoJingles on Feb-12-2008 22:35:

Thanks.


Posted by Spliph on Feb-13-2008 00:27:

sounds good mate, yoou might want to change the level of that snare... or maybe change the sound all together, it doesn't fit with the rest of the sounds its too harsssh


keep on groovin!


Posted by MrJiveBoJingles on Feb-13-2008 00:35:

quote:
Originally posted by Spliph
sounds good mate, yoou might want to change the level of that snare... or maybe change the sound all together, it doesn't fit with the rest of the sounds its too harsssh

keep on groovin!

Thanks. I actually thought about changing the snare or its level, but wasn't sure. I'll experiment with it.


Posted by RJT on Feb-19-2008 06:03:



I had no idea that you produced until I saw your sig just today - this is absolutely lovely m8. Excellent little the percs are awesome - sounds almost like a breakbeat but it isn't, mixdown sounds solid, and it's trancey noises at low BPM's, which is right up my alley.

I'd like a 320 please, this one is going right into my bag for a while.

I'd also love remix parts - and if you're looking for a label, I might have an idea or two for you as well


Posted by RJT on Feb-19-2008 06:15:

And check your pm


Posted by MrJiveBoJingles on Feb-19-2008 06:21:

Thanks!

Here's a Sendspace link to a 320 version:

http://www.sendspace.com/file/ubccj9

I'll try to get some remix parts together for you later this week.


Posted by Spliph on Feb-19-2008 06:31:

rob, where are your tracks


Posted by RJT on Feb-19-2008 06:36:

quote:
Originally posted by Spliph
rob, where are your tracks


Taking a long while (18 credit semester + research).

I really was re inspired by this one though - so hoping I can manage a decent remix out of it.


Posted by MrJiveBoJingles on Feb-19-2008 13:17:

Check your PM.


Posted by 00264167 on Feb-19-2008 20:23:

out of interest what software/hardware do you use for your productions?
thanks


Posted by MrJiveBoJingles on Feb-19-2008 21:38:

quote:
Originally posted by 00264167
out of interest what software/hardware do you use for your productions?
thanks

For this one I made all the synth sounds with Reason, and used Audacity to edit one sample (the "airy" reverb sound that's most prominent at the beginning and end). The sample itself was also made in Reason.


Posted by david.michael on Feb-19-2008 21:58:

Great track! Don't have time to respond farther than that currently, but I dug it.


Posted by MrJiveBoJingles on Feb-19-2008 22:05:

Thanks.


Posted by nefardec on Mar-05-2008 02:31:

i'm glad i checked this out

it does have a bit of 'reasonitis' and maybe some tired sounds, but it's generally really some nice trance to listen to.

i love the subtleness before the chord changes at the end

if i played it i would edit the chord (bass) changes out i think


Posted by MrJiveBoJingles on Mar-05-2008 02:38:

Thanks. Was kind of hoping you would give it a listen since I really like your tracks.


Posted by B_man on Mar-05-2008 06:05:

Sounds pretty dope, if you ask me. Personally, I liked the clopping smack of your snare, I guess I got use to it. Otherwise, it sounded rather deep ... usually you get this massive 'epic' trance that try to make statements with these ludicrous melodies and anthem builds. This piece simply stays cool, thumps away under a shadow-cornered street light watching the metro cars sip by the freeways... nodding and nodding under an atmospheric hood.

While this track doesn't hit my favorite trance list, it is still a cool track that I can see growing on me in many ways.


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