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[power Trance] Lunar Eclipse- Conclusive (demo)
Heey mates !
here it is: long awaited track, Conclusive...
But still in demo- so that you could say how do you feel about the production. I put it in 320 kbp/s quality. Enjoy and... FEEDBACK NEEDED !!!! Please 
Link : [[ LINK REMOVED ]]
Greetings,
Lunar Eclipse.
wow, seems to be pro.
this track is very trance and energy, I can hear a lot of work done here.
how about sending me some midi files ? I wanna listen to the lead on my fl studio :>
good work....!!!
Hi fenix. Thanks for your reply. Lets stay in touch on PM's.
Any more opinions :> ?
This sounds awesome, fantastic track...
However, after the break, the track seems to loose its momentum? It has a good rythm and beat before the break, but there seems to be something that's not quite so flowing after the break. Anyway, it has a brilliant atmosphere, and those pads and synths are brilliant.
Keep it up,
Decane.
Awesome. I wouldn't change a thing. Balance between pads, drums, bass etc. is excellent.
Well thanks a lot ! I ve alreade lowered a few mid freq., so that there is less white noise. But the link is still old :> ANY one else ?
Well let's see here... I hear a few glitches in the sound. What's that all about?
You have a very Ron Van Den Beuken* feeling going on here at the beginning... This continues throughout the track. The bass has almost "too much" body I would say. It overwhelms the midrange of the track. That could just be me personally, too. Other than that you have achieved great success with a trance anthem here. It is only a little bit generic. Overall I would say, perhaps mix it down or EQ it in such a way that Ron Van Den Beuken* would be very proud, because this is exactly the style you have achieved. Good work, and great analogue sound.
Corrected the artist I mentioned **
Try putting some variation in that plucked bassline that is easily heard in the intro. It sounds like a "machine gun".
You need a lot more sub-bass in your kick.
The square that comes in with the pad has some bad notes.. try reworking it. Try making the square a bit brighter, too.
The track really feels rushed. The break comes in, you have your kinda lame melody, and then BAM.. you think you can just fuck with the energy of the crowd before they even have a chance to enjoy the track.
You have a bit of distortion in the track when the bass/kick/melody all come in.
Hey.
If you listen to some "powered" trance you notice, that there is no complicated melody.
Also plucked sounds are going to make a realisitic sensation of rush- so it does not need to be so "difficult".
Maybe you could listen to some other rush tracks, like
Mike Wind- Oxygen Essential(asot mix), Dmitri Federov - Falling of Stars (Paul Miller Remix), Entrance 2008 anthem etc. It sounds quite similar.
Ye disortions...I can agree with the glitches. I changed some freq to avoid any disortions. I will send the newest sample soon.
For Alanzo: I dont care about your "fucking" and "machine guns". I try doing my best, so dont say I do a "fuck" for crowds. Anyway, people like the song. Thats enough for me.
Maybe I am wrong but I suppose alanzo to be a little bit jealous or something. Am I right :> ?
Regards,
its good overall, strong intro with the bass, drums and stuttered rhythem but perhaps a bigger hook in the lead part might make it less generic sounding. im also hearing a little too much bass through headphones after someone else mentioned it.
im still learning myself so would also be interested in looking at the midi files and details of what synths you used to make it, thanks.
Hehe.. no, I'm not jealous.
I didn't mean fuck in a derogatory way. You can replace it with "mess" or "screw" etc...
As I read your comments- I realise my faults. It is really hard to find some of them. (but another part of them is "visible for me" so they have already been changed). The best thing is getting feedback from "3rd person" people.
Nevertheless I ve already made some corrections. Furthermore, I will focus today on some particular mastering.
So the newest sample will probably be posted in a few hours.
CHeeers
Any updates on this song, its pretty amazing
Heya Lunar_Eclipse,
Gave this track a listen and it's might mighty fine.
In terms of artistic composition the track is ready to roll. Never start changing melodic elements just because other people don't like it. If it's how you wanted the track then keep it that way.
Personally I think it's great.
Something that people tend to forget on this forum sometimes is that it's ultimately DJs who will play them. As far as your intro goes, I can see this working with a ton of stuff.
It's evident that this track was written for the dance floor and that is where it will do it's damage.
I would however recomend that you sort out the bass frequency in the kick drum as it's a little thin. It might even be the sample that you have used that needs changing. That would be my only comment.
I would very much like a 320 of this track as I would be very happy to start giving this club play for you. I also think that you would benefit by sending this to Judge Jules and Agnelli n' Nelson. They may or may not play it but I think you have a good chance.
Cheers
Nem
Loved it. Progressed nicely. Wont stick in my mind but good nevertheless. I like the sine'y arpeg that comes in towards the end after the last break.
Cool track.
Keep up the good work.
exellent track. Its not my preffered style, but its banging and the production is solid.
Wow, just listened and I'll need a minute to catch my breath! :P Lol there sure are no downtempo moments to be found here, no time wasted at all. I haven't heard your master but i think it will do wonders, since the tune just needs to sound a little brighter in the high range and it'll be pretty much perfect.
The arrangement all makes sense and sounds professional. The only thing I might have expected to hear is for you to have brought the full melody out in the breakdown, since its quite a nice one, albeit simple. At the moment you introduce the synth and then the melody sort of comes out of leftfield, although if you're going for the surprise element then I see what you're doing ...
All round, good work matey
As for a demo, this is amazing. Great potential in this tune! Sounds really 'pro'... After a bit of polishing it'll definetly be signable stuff. Good job!
I love driving trance like this. The kick could punch through the mix a little more, but that's just my opinion. That is hard to do without taking away the bass' spotlight, so I'll not be dogmatic.
Excellent production overall... it makes me feel like I'm plowing through a nebula in a motorcycle -- at the risk of sounding unsane.
Wow guys I am surprised you really like it. Fuck...im motivated...I will put a little bit mastered version (in 320kbps)-new kick, more high freq(perk) and less glitches. // soon means in a few hours- I am at school right now.
so brb...
this is sick, i can really feel the energy on the break on this one- i disagree with the previous poster in that i thought the break really caught me up to where i needed to be. id much prefer using percussion and generally widening the overall sound to create a break then throwing in fancy piano work to try and get blood flowing- just imho.
my only qualm would be the mid-white-noise. i feel like youve just got to much band coming in from to many different place exspecially in the begining before the master compression chops a lot of it out. if im hearing correctly theres a faint background saw in the begining thats mostly all band and almost seems like could just get wacked off the track or perhaps just eqed a bit.
also, dont get to mad at alonzo- i get upset about those guys to but then its always what forces me to make the greatest improvement in the end its a great favor.
overall awsome track deing to hear more !
Hey guys :>
AS I promised, I put some changes into the track. Mastering is not perfect -still- but Im conviced that the track goes much better with the punchy kick, less noise, more perc and some changes with the beepy / plucky motive in the end of the chorus.
What do you think about it now :>?
Here is the link : [[ LINK REMOVED ]]
Would appreciate every feedback.
Lovely ... sounds like it could easily have jumped right off Alphazone's next release (or at least the style they used to produce). I can't really hear anything wrong listening through speakers, everything complements nicely. Start sending this baby out!
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| Originally posted by Lunar_Eclipse Hey guys :> AS I promised, I put some changes into the track. Mastering is not perfect -still- but Im conviced that the track goes much better with the punchy kick, less noise, more perc and some changes with the beepy / plucky motive in the end of the chorus. What do you think about it now :>? Here is the link : [[ LINK REMOVED ]] Would appreciate every feedback. |
). You can try Armin and Sean Tyas for example, it's very much their style (especially the latter).
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