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Posted by rriparetti on May-06-2008 01:24:

New (trance) track

Heres my fourth trance track I tried to make on Reason 4.0
New to this forum, hopefully you guys can give me (better) feedback, the other one really didnt help.

Anyways, I know its flawed so just help me out on there, it just seems like something big is missing. The bass line is intended to be the arpeggiator by the way, so its not that. It just seems something SO big from my thought of trance to actual trance. Anyone wanna pinpoint what I am missing in my track, and if you dont, can you give me some feedback?

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Anyways, thats all there is for that. Note around 1:55 in the song, right after the melody gets (progressively) fast, theres a breakdown and know that the volume of a synth is WAY too loud, so turn down your volume for that part.

ANY criticism is helpful.

Posted by rriparetti on May-06-2008 14:44:

Do you think thats what is missing, what probably makes my song different than something of BLank and Jones tracks, and other producers? I figured something was definitly missing.
In general, do some pads give you that extra "uumph" for energy (specifically Reason 4.0 pads)

And I would definitly say the intro was chill, and like from 3:30-4:30 was really legit. That minute sounded hella dancy

Where did you get those sound loops? or did you just record yourself on cubase or something

Posted by rriparetti on May-07-2008 04:15:

So anyways, I think I changed up the melody sound and I added a actually really cool delayed bassline. My music & computers teacher told me not to delay my bass, but it actually sounds a lot cooler with delay, in my opinion

********, I hope the bassline added some energy to this track. Otherwise Im going to look for some more pads or synths.

Thoughts on this (edited) track?
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