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Posted by Papus on May-20-2008 16:43:

Check out my 2 new tracks!

It's like a high energyht with dream elements. Gimme some feedback on what could be better, Thanks!

http://www.zshare.net/audio/1231086449fda7fd/

http://www.zshare.net/audio/1231104433e582d6/

Posted by Papus on May-21-2008 00:49:

No one?

Posted by adi_hanson on May-21-2008 20:45:

listening to track 1 :-(running commentary)
ok start , then at 35 secs, whoa thats good but then it goes away?? and the first hook comes in , sounds good but should have that first background tune involved.and into the middle part but low in volume and then it kicks in again lol ahhhhhhhhh its gone again , but it is now back there in the background as it should be the first part of the song,drawn out ending.

track 2:-
this is not my cup of tea at all but here goes:-
funky starting , but not as good as track 1 , think you should concentrate and look at track1 and get that one sounding more constant as it could be a good tune with that first hook/lead playing a part in the whole song