New here and would like to get some feedback on a new track

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Posted by yosi199 on Jun-27-2008 19:18:

New here and would like to get some feedback on a new track

Hi guys! I'm Yosi and I'm from Israel, 21 years old. producing for a few years now with a hope for a breakthrough soon (like all of us
Would like you to have a listen at my latest track which is just about done exept for final editing and mixing...

Well here it is:
http://download.yousendit.com/FB4984DA439BBCF5

any replay will be kind!
Thanks in advance, Yosi.

Posted by Vortex_SA on Jun-27-2008 20:58:

i feel some of your sounds are very thin... the overall mix has loads of highs you might wanna lower those.. also the melody is really not so clear i can barely hear it... i also feel a very simple overall sound and build... maybe play around more with your synths and breaks... overall nice.

Posted by yosi199 on Jun-27-2008 21:25:

Thanks for your feedback vortex, I guess you are probably right, I use only my hifi headphones (it sounds wonderfall in them) for this track since I'm on a low budget right now and can't seem to afford a pair of good monitors.

I think I will wait with this one until I get monitors in my studio since I do like the feel of this track. Maybe with some work on it I will be able to get a nice track here?

BTW I've listen to some of your tunes. Really nice style.

Posted by Vortex_SA on Jun-28-2008 00:50:

nice to hear that

you can call me שגיא

btw there is an israeli forum here you might wanna stop by and say hello...

and i totally feel your situation, low budget all the way!

Posted by pwnage1 on Jun-28-2008 02:06:

I really like the style. The sounds all fit together really well including the kick (which i find is the most difficult to get to fit). This tune has secured a spot on my tranceaddict itunes playlist.

I am kind of in the same position as you. I feel like i am limited by my hardware. I am producing on a Intel Pentium 4 1.4GHz with 512 ram. once i have one synth sound i have to export it to audio, i get so bored of it i rarely finish a tune. I am mixing on dollar store headphones . Pretty much the only reason i have fl studio is because my cousin gave it to me for free because he no longer produces hip hop(not a cracked copy). And my echo audiofire was purchased with בר מצוה money. Anyways, Best of luck to you from Washington State.

Posted by yosi199 on Jun-28-2008 04:57:

Thanks pwnage1, I'm glad you liked me tune. I must say you do have a low spec pc for creating this kind of genere that uses so many vsti and plugins. I'm on a low budget since I've just upgraded my computer, I hated working in an "add track than immidatley freeze it" enviorment.
Now I have all my synths and plugs working all toghther with no glitches and no expore/freezes which is awsome!
I guess in a monthe or two I will be able to get my so needed monitors.

Oh and sagie I will make sure to visit this forum when I'll have some more time, right now I gotta go and make a living. Bye!