Track Sample: NIN - Discipline (Dave Molina Isolation Edit)

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Posted by davemolina on Jul-22-2008 05:00:

Track Sample: NIN - Discipline (Dave Molina Isolation Edit)

Just started working on this yesterday...gotta speed it up a little and mix up the drum patterns a lil.

What do you think?

www.myspace.com/davemolina

Posted by D Dubya on Jul-22-2008 14:14:

sick track bro... very nice job on it. can't wait to hear the whole thing!

Posted by davemolina on Jul-22-2008 15:11:

Thanks!!!

I should have it done by the weekend.

EDIT: Does the bassline sound off-key? I think I need to raise it a step or two.

Posted by jonas on Jul-22-2008 15:22:

quote:
Originally posted by davemolina
Thanks!!!

I should have it done by the weekend.

EDIT: Does the bassline sound off-key? I think I need to raise it a step or two.

It doesn't really sound off key. But I would add a little to that layer. The current state sounds a little G&D 2003. But, I like the track nonetheless. Good job.

Now go back to your hole.

Posted by davemolina on Jul-22-2008 15:37:

quote:
Originally posted by jonas
It doesn't really sound off key. But I would add a little to that layer. The current state sounds a little G&D 2003. But, I like the track nonetheless. Good job.

Now go back to your hole.

What do you mean by a little to the layer? It just seems off to me for some reason. I only added percussion to it and used some phaser on the main riff, so the G&D sound belongs to Senor Reznor. I just screwed and chopped it.

Posted by jonas on Jul-22-2008 15:41:

quote:
Originally posted by davemolina
What do you mean by a little to the layer? It just seems off to me for some reason. I only added percussion to it and used some phaser on the main riff, so the G&D sound belongs to Senor Reznor. I just screwed and chopped it.

Ah, I see. I haven't heard the original version of the track, so I didn't know what was your production. My thought would be to add a little bit more of a bassline to the track. I thought the guitar riffs and bass were yours. I would add to that, IMO.

EDIT>>> Or what sounds like a bass guitar in the track.

Posted by davemolina on Jul-22-2008 16:07:

quote:
Originally posted by jonas
Ah, I see. I haven't heard the original version of the track, so I didn't know what was your production. My thought would be to add a little bit more of a bassline to the track. I thought the guitar riffs and bass were yours. I would add to that, IMO.

EDIT>>> Or what sounds like a bass guitar in the track.

I think I see what you're saying. I'll try to layer the tracks and thicken up one of them.

PS. Suck it.

Posted by Zild on Jul-22-2008 16:13:

Needs more cowbell. Just kidding about to listen to it here in a minute. I'll let you know what I think.

Posted by Zild on Jul-22-2008 16:21:

The kick could be a little more definied perhaps a little sidechain to get that pump. Maybe layer the bass a little more. I have it turned up but it isn't shaking my walls.

Be careful though because you don't want to drown out the vocals.

A little tom fill with a crash every 8 bars could work perhaps switch from hats to ride somewhere to mix it up a bit. Kinda like a live drummer since there is guitar and bass etc...

Posted by davemolina on Jul-22-2008 16:30:

quote:
Originally posted by Zild
The kick could be a little more definied perhaps a little sidechain to get that pump. Maybe layer the bass a little more. I have it turned up but it isn't shaking my walls.

Be careful though because you don't want to drown out the vocals.

A little tom fill with a crash every 8 bars could work perhaps switch from hats to ride somewhere to mix it up a bit. Kinda like a live drummer since there is guitar and bass etc...

I was thinking to double the bass line layer, cut out all the mid and high, then compress only the low and mid-low frequencies.

I haven't compressed the kick either, so that's a must when I get home.

The cymbal idea is good. I though to add some kick variations as well.

Thanks for the help guys. Now if you'll excuse me, I'm gonna go home and put some water in Dirk's mama's dish. Good evening.

Posted by D Dubya on Jul-22-2008 16:33:

quote:
Originally posted by davemolina
I was thinking to double the bass line layer, cut out all the mid and high, then compress only the low and mid-low frequencies.

I haven't compressed the kick either, so that's a must when I get home.

The cymbal idea is good. I though to add some kick variations as well.

Thanks for the help guys. Now if you'll excuse me, I'm gonna go home and put some water in Dirk's mama's dish. Good evening.

hey, after filling it up would you mind holding your head in it? just a little while.

Posted by Zild on Jul-22-2008 16:34:

Cool. I'll see if I can think of any other ideas but it does sound fine right now. Just needs a little bit of variation and maybe mix it a few different ways to see what sounds best. Listening to some reference tracks right now to get a better idea and it isn't too far away from wall shaking.

Posted by davemolina on Jul-22-2008 16:42:

I wish I had the mind of a drummer...and the liver of a sailor.

Posted by D Dubya on Jul-22-2008 16:44:

quote:
Originally posted by davemolina
I wish I had the mind of a drummer...and the liver of a sailor.

you can't be as gifted as me.

Posted by Zild on Jul-22-2008 17:00:

quote:
Originally posted by davemolina
I wish I had the mind of a drummer...and the liver of a sailor.

I wish I had a good pancreas.

Posted by Carlos Pereira on Jul-22-2008 18:40:

I wish I had a smaller penis. This gets uncomfortable to carry around sometimes.

Posted by jonas on Jul-22-2008 19:36:

quote:
Originally posted by architect1803
I wish I had a smaller penis. This gets uncomfortable to carry around sometimes.

Then take it out of your ass and leave your boyfriend at home

Posted by D Dubya on Jul-22-2008 19:38:

quote:
Originally posted by architect1803
I wish I had a smaller penis. This gets uncomfortable to carry around sometimes.

what's so awkward about your vag?

Posted by Carlos Pereira on Jul-22-2008 20:38:

quote:
Originally posted by jonas
Then take it out of your ass and leave your boyfriend at home

Jonas, your mom is NOT a man. What she does to my ass is our business.

Posted by D Dubya on Jul-22-2008 20:45:

quote:
Originally posted by architect1803
Jonas, your mom is NOT a man. What she does to my ass is our business.

Posted by jonas on Jul-22-2008 20:50:

quote:
Originally posted by architect1803
Jonas, your mom is NOT a man. What she does to my ass is our business.

So basically you're saying you let my mom bang you with a strap on like a little bitch?

Posted by davemolina on Jul-22-2008 20:51:

Please leave my thread...now.

Posted by D Dubya on Jul-22-2008 21:08:

why?

Posted by Carlos Pereira on Jul-23-2008 00:39:

quote:
Originally posted by jonas
So basically you're saying you let my mom bang you with a strap on like a little bitch?

No. She liked the taste of Puerto Rican culo, so she went in and....well....Dave's got it down.

//insert salad picture here//

Posted by system9 on Jul-25-2008 22:20:

add one more layer and reverb the vocal just a tad ...my 2 cents

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