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Posted by itsamemario on Aug-19-2008 14:01:

DJ Alfi - FingerBANG

Just finished this track that Ive been working on for 3 days now. All i got left to do is some minor tweaks that I need proper monitors to do.

Its a darkish kinda electrotech tune, very Swen Weber inspired..

http://dump.no/files/eb1c2f17897e/D..._FingerBANG.mp3

Feedback is as always apreciated

Enjoy

Posted by itsamemario on Aug-30-2008 15:04:

wow thanks for all the great feedback

Posted by Gabriel Cazali on Aug-30-2008 15:13:

hmm i really didn�t like the vocals =0/

the track its really well finished but....... didn�t like at all
sorry :$ (just a personal thing)

you really make a good job here, congrats

Posted by Theran on Aug-30-2008 16:04:

Hey Alfi, I really liked your track.
I really liked the heavy bass, this track sound like something i'd play in a set.

I have mixed feelings about the vocals, but I'll listen to it a couple of times more.

Keep it up!

Posted by itsamemario on Aug-30-2008 18:08:

cheers
ive tried removing the vocals, but i couldnt come up with a new element that would work as well with the automation in the buildup..

Posted by Theran on Aug-30-2008 18:41:

quote:
Originally posted by dj_alfi
cheers
ive tried removing the vocals, but i couldnt come up with a new element that would work as well with the automation in the buildup..

Maybe you could try to automate the release on that bass, try to create a sort of 'flight 643' effect.

Posted by adi_hanson on Aug-31-2008 21:30:

mmm , reminds me of scouse house , maybe you wanna put a donk on it

but seriously , very well produced
Sorta the thing that you would hear on a TV program about gang culture.
Very dark,
Not something i would be into ,
but still impressed by your production skills

In all it seems something more aimed at the black youth side of things.

Posted by SeanCronin on Aug-31-2008 21:53:

Thats a really great track mate. Love the bassline in it. I agree with the others that the vocal doesn't go well with the track. Well the rap bit. The "Bang" vox sounds pretty good. What if you tried a really long snare roll for the main break?? Just a suggestion but could give it a kind of Randy katana-In silence or Armani & Ghost airport kind of power to it. Although these tracks are Trance & Techno it could still sound mental with your track the way it builds up and the bass kicks in.

Posted by SeanCronin on Aug-31-2008 22:03:

Sounds like something that would get signed to Doorn Records!! Should think about sending it to them.

Posted by itsamemario on Sep-01-2008 00:28:

quote:
Originally posted by SeanCronin
Thats a really great track mate. Love the bassline in it. I agree with the others that the vocal doesn't go well with the track. Well the rap bit. The "Bang" vox sounds pretty good. What if you tried a really long snare roll for the main break?? Just a suggestion but could give it a kind of Randy katana-In silence or Armani & Ghost airport kind of power to it. Although these tracks are Trance & Techno it could still sound mental with your track the way it builds up and the bass kicks in.

thanks for the comment

the thing about the vocals is that during the breakdown, there are 7 parameters for the vocals that are automated, and i havent been able to find something to replace it with..

maybe ill have another go with the track when im done working on my ep.

Posted by Domesticated on Sep-01-2008 12:03:

Haha, this is great.

Suits your "online personality" very well.

I like the vocal, but I think the break goes on way too long.

Posted by Rinster on Sep-02-2008 15:45:

interesting tune, nice! only thing i think though its lacking is a bit more drive percussion wise, other then that good work! 7/10

Posted by bamski on Sep-04-2008 09:17:

I liked Dark White, a lot.

But I liked this, a lot more.

Posted by mark_gg_daniels on Sep-04-2008 13:15:

Hey

First off, the vocals r fine - cant see what the problem is there 2 b honest - gives the tune attitude and i like it

I personally would just leave them - and I dont quite get what that comment was earlier about 'the black youth would like it' - strange comment to make I think

Love that bassy thing, think thats what makes this tune

Cant hear any problems with technical side of things

Think this would be a stormer in a lot of clubs I go to - maybe its just a london thing?

Good work

oh and its helping me tidy up (along with some others on here) so extra points for that

Definate relase worthy