I've Worked On This Song Every Day For Three Months: Listen

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Posted by blorgpulkfplork on Nov-07-2008 22:48:

I've Worked On This Song Every Day For Three Months: Listen

http://www.soundclick.com/djblorgpulkfplorksickle

The song is the top on the list-- "Ahava-Happiness Condensed"

Please do me a favor and critique it--for my sanity--some have said that this is one of the best songs they've heard in a long time, but others don't seem to like something about it....I want to know what you think.

I want to get this signed soon if I can--do you think this is realistic?

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE LEAVE COMMENTS--any bit of criticism will help me

Posted by PutBoy on Nov-07-2008 23:01:

I like the groove. I like the atmosphere. I like the production. It's good.

Posted by Nicolas Oliver on Nov-08-2008 00:52:

Great track m8.

I definitely think it could be signed.

Posted by Sh!fty on Nov-08-2008 17:48:

melodic good track,

the percussion can be much more, to be a great tech trance trance, it should have more elements

what especially drew my attention was a particular irritating snare patern: High snare, low snare, highsnare

The whole mixdown sounded a bit muddy to me

Posted by parafrNalia on Nov-08-2008 20:15:

I'd tend to agree about the mudiness.

Posted by Gabriel Cazali on Nov-08-2008 20:30:

needs more work on the final sound for me
but, the idea its pretty good
its true, work more on the perclines , make em more dynamic
the pads are pretty nice

in the bridge, that guitar/piano sounds good, but... meaby a lil bit to simply? it sound that u used the arpeggiator , it sounds good, but it can be better (very very personal opinion)

well done! =) nice track u make here
it worth the 3 month effort

Posted by goodtime on Nov-09-2008 03:35:

I think its grat and you should release it. its better than some of Armins or Tiestos latest stuff. Geez some of u guys will never make it the way you obsess. its just music FFS.

Posted by Sh!fty on Nov-09-2008 10:12:

quote:
Originally posted by goodtime
Geez some of u guys will never make it the way you obsess. its just music FFS.

He asked for our opinion and he got mine (artist 2 artist).
He can choose to either ignore our advice or not, that's up to him.
It's easy to write that his song was great, but that wouldn't help him when labels would reject his song, doesn't it?

Posted by goodtime on Nov-09-2008 11:25:

any label that rejects this song is dumb, or has ulterior motives for rejecting it, I think if you listen to the shit that gets released you will know.

Posted by Akridrot on Nov-11-2008 01:47:

You said you worked on this song everyday for 3 months, and I believe you. Only thing that needs to be improved is the clarity of the mix, really. The foundation of the track is strong, which is a good thing. Just work on finding a way to make the mix sound as professional as possible.

Posted by music2dance2 on Nov-11-2008 03:52:

No question you could get this signed. As others have said work on the mix and varition on some percs. But to be honest its far off, overall the track is a great melodic track. Good work dude

Posted by goodtime on Nov-11-2008 07:08:

Everyone it has just come to my attention that this dude is actually already a very famous producer and we have all been had!

Posted by music2dance2 on Nov-11-2008 07:26:

Good lord

Posted by jupiterone on Nov-11-2008 07:57:

really good

Posted by Mr.Mystery on Nov-11-2008 08:11:

quote:
Originally posted by goodtime
Everyone it has just come to my attention that this dude is actually already a very famous producer and we have all been had!

Could you just please go away?

Posted by noicuc on Nov-15-2008 06:36:

good melody , and true , any label would be dumb to reject this.

Posted by pwnage1 on Nov-15-2008 07:10:

I would reject it. The ideas are there as people said but the piano doesn't sit right for me. That said there is a lot i like about this track but the overall song i just don't like. Personal preference.

Also, i'll echo what others have said and say the mix needs some clarifying.

Posted by MrJiveBoJingles on Nov-17-2008 07:13:

Wow, that was epic. Wonderful melodies and progression. And it has some pretty unique sounds and a more complicated arrangement that set it apart from the usual epic trance style.

You just need to clarify the mixing and you'll be on your way...

Posted by PDM on Nov-17-2008 07:41:

Music wise is a gem, now technically it is truely a mess.
The kick distorts when it plays, plus later on it is overshadowed by the melodies. The overall sound is a bit muddy and there is excess of low end and lack of brightness.

So it needs a proper mixdown and mastering and its ready, oh and of course a proper intro and outro to make it Dj friendly.