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Posted by Sonic_c on Dec-02-2008 15:37:

UPDATED WITH MORE MELODIES - Melodic trance from Sonic c

Before anyone says too soon this has been in the workings for 10 weeks just happens to have come together.

My best work IMO

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Called A Star Too Far I really like worked for weeks on it so hope you all enjoy it

EDIT:

I reworked it over the last week or so new bass 3 new melodies etc is it better? worse? have i done too much?

http://www.speedyshare.com/439668199.html

Posted by MrJiveBoJingles on Dec-02-2008 15:47:

Melody has more feeling than the one in your last track, IMO. Maybe it's just me, but the bassline doesn't seem to go that well with the rest of the track. I think you have a good start, but I'd like to hear some contrasting moods (possibly with some additional melodies?) throughout the track to make it more engaging.

Posted by Fuxzz on Dec-02-2008 16:08:

Hey.

Good Atmosphere and the piano are nice.
I agree u need a few more melodies and som FX and whitenoise could spice it up a little.

I like the ground, just dont think of it as ready yet and it will be good

Nice work

DT

Posted by Sonic_c on Dec-02-2008 16:11:

Someone else also commented on bassline. Said it could be more prominent and modern. Ill look into it. Couple of people reckon I could with a little work get this to release stage anyone agree or shall I geet back to the drawing board? I think I will also shorten it and spice it up. I tried to make 12" mix with dj friendly in and outros but people are not feeling it so gonna stick some more stuff in there. Its finding that balance between and full sounding song and a light airy mix thats hard.

Posted by Fuxzz on Dec-02-2008 16:28:

You could try a different sound on the bass, it sounds a little dated, I think it fits tho. I def think you should finnish it, if you get the structure right it may be signable. It will be a good song non the less

Posted by futurefoton929 on Dec-02-2008 16:44:

I am listening to your music on a crappy headphone so I'll just try to limit my comment on arrangements.

1) It might sound better if the melody synth line fades in at the beginning.

2) It would be cool if there is a little breakbeat interlude somewhere with your main melody intact or some other sort of a variation (like using a dynamic filter on certain measures).

Overall, it's a solid track but it'd be much better if you spice it up a bit with quirks here and there.

Good luck.

Posted by music2dance2 on Dec-02-2008 19:52:

nice track, good work on the piano. Yeah bass could be thicker. one thing i noticed is the break is quite loud then the level drops when it kicks back it id change that.

Posted by Sonic_c on Dec-02-2008 20:07:

quote:
Originally posted by music2dance2
nice track, good work on the piano. Yeah bass could be thicker. one thing i noticed is the break is quite loud then the level drops when it kicks back it id change that.

Yeah i think it might be filters opening too much I am going to re do this song. Has anyone ever produced something that at the time seems immense and better than anything you ever done? then after thought of things you would change!

THIS SHIT IS NEVERENDING

Posted by music2dance2 on Dec-02-2008 20:17:

Im quite sure that applies to everyone.