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Posted by theeyesofdarkness on Jun-11-2002 17:21:

poetry

just a couple days ago i was bored at work and i was doodelin around on some paper and i started to write a poem. something i have never done cause i have no writing skills what~so~ever. but they actually came out ok. not great but ok.. i was wondering if anyone has any poems they have written that they would like to share. id share mine but i forgot exactly how they go and they are at home but ill bring them to work tomorrow and put em up. =)

peace
xox
-layla

Posted by Orbax on Jun-11-2002 18:18:

I will bring back the Haiku thread. Post it there

Posted by Glyph on Jun-12-2002 00:28:

Yeah, I've actually got a bunch of them. Like you, I'd never written one either. Then, thanks to a woman and a bad case of unrequited love, I went through this phase like 6 years ago. I actually placed first in a contest and won $500. Pretty cool. Anyway, if you'd like to check 'em out they're here

Posted by davinox on Jun-12-2002 00:37:

the only poem i actually took time to write.

spossively it's going to be published in some shitty poetry.com book. ahh...i bet they tell that to all the writers...

go to http://www.poetry.com/

search up my name. (David Merriman)

Posted by cHiLD on Jun-12-2002 02:01:

I've got some of my original lyrics and poems on my site:
jadedchild
feel free to look around

Posted by Orbax on Jun-12-2002 02:03:

post a pic of yourself somewhere child

Posted by JM on Jun-12-2002 02:37:

only time i write poems, or anything as such is when i'm frustrated with things. i then use poems to release that frustration, and let some feelings out in a positive way. i will not share my latest poem, it is just too deep, and you guys would probably think i'm nuts haha...

>JM<

Posted by Slylee on Jun-12-2002 04:07:

A guy sticks his location,
In a girl's destinstion,
To increase the population,
For the next generation.
Do you get my explanation?
Or do you need a demonstration?

Posted by Orbax on Jun-12-2002 04:09:

hands on demo?

Like jewels in a crown, the precious stones glittered in the queen's round metal hat.

Posted by u4ea:[soulstar] on Jun-12-2002 08:15:

Hmm.. Been a while since I wrote any prose. I'll post this one I wrote some 5 years ago:

In the Twilight of the morning hour
The stillness is silent and the air is breathless.
When darkness welcomes all to sleep,
I will welcome your embrace,
Know the velvet warmth
Of baby rabbits close to me.
And know nothing else
but the serenity that bathes my soul.
As my eyes crumble and close
Into mortal bliss,
Time will hold its breath,
For always.