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Posted by tobaddiction on Apr-21-2009 18:22:

Tobaddiction - Broken Nails (Not Really Mastered Version) >> Progressive House

Hello Guys!

I want to ask you for a feedback of my first self-made track called "Broken Nails". I do not want to tell you any details but leave you alone with it, i will say something after some feedbacks. I produce since half a year spending much time in it.

Software:
Ableton Live 7, Massive, DJ-Headphones as ..... wtf does "abh�re" means in english??? the thing the sound comes out ^^

thanks in advance

cheers

Tobaddiction - Broken Nails (Not really mastered Version) by Tobaddiction

cheers

Posted by tobaddiction on Apr-21-2009 19:27:

edit: i am sorry but i did not know that you have to be registrated to hear the song. i will upload it to another plattform...

Posted by tobaddiction on Apr-21-2009 19:48:

you can listen to the song in 128 kb and in a cutted version on my myspace-music page which i have created today...

http://www.myspace.com/tobaddiction

cheers

Posted by flow1988 on Apr-21-2009 19:54:

the first body after the swoosh was kind of long. a little too long. it had no direction. but during the second body with the other elements it starts getting kind of good. maybe u need to re arrange it?

Posted by tobaddiction on Apr-22-2009 17:47:

thank you for your feedback.

the break lasts for 1:30, maybe that would be fine if i would find some "direction" as you said, new elements fitting in the break... i have to try.. thank you

but first i need other feedbacks

Posted by tobaddiction on Apr-22-2009 19:38:

ehmm, no i don't have any idea

Posted by EddieZilker on Apr-23-2009 02:13:

Click the share button, above the file, then highlight the script, copy that onto your clip-board, and paste it, here.

Abhor means to hate, btw. I do not abhor your song but I do think it could be developed a lot further.

It's a pleasant listen, however and the mix is well balanced.

Posted by tobaddiction on Apr-23-2009 17:31:

thank you!

i will rearrange this track this weekend....

cheers