Ahava- Aether (uplifting melodic trance)

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Posted by blorgpulkfplork on Apr-23-2009 23:15:

Ahava- Aether (uplifting melodic trance)

It's the top track on the page...I've been working on equing and mastering a lot--hopefully the mix is sufficiently good--please let me know what you think

please critique if you listen

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/def...m?bandID=815435

Posted by blorgpulkfplork on May-06-2009 03:40:

anyone?

Posted by KamilB on May-06-2009 11:08:

It's not bad, but it's getting pretty boring in the middle. Personally I don't feel main melody.

Mastering is decent, main part is a little dull.

Posted by mfitterer1 on May-06-2009 18:27:

I listened to it last night, I agree with the above post, the melody was supposed to drive the song from what it sounded like, but it didn't really do so. Also I think the main break ended oddly, it didn't sound ideal to me bringing all of the elements in at once after the break, you missed out on alot of tension you could have built by bringing them in slowly before the break ended and THEN having them all play together. The eq and mastering sounded fine to me though. Your drums sounded a bit thin and you may want to add a few more different loops in there as well to help push the song through.

Not a bad start at all though.

Posted by RichieV on May-06-2009 22:12:

should be a little more specific on what you want critiqued. Otherwise you might want to use the forum everyone else uses.

Posted by orTof�nChiLd on May-06-2009 22:51:

Splendid track, i can tell its gonna be in the next asot.

Posted by mfitterer1 on May-07-2009 00:38:

quote:
Originally posted by orTof�nChiLd
Splendid track, i can tell its gonna be in the next asot.

You didn't have to insult him that badly!