Work-in-progress...Comments would be wonderful!

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Posted by IanBuzz on Apr-25-2009 21:40:

Work-in-progress...Comments would be wonderful!

sup guyzzz

well first off... is this already a song? haha... the main melody after I made it sounded really familiar and in all honesty it's just what came out

secondly, your thoughts... too boring? too ____? leme know i'd really appreciate it guys!

keep in mind it's a work-in-progress

Thanks so much,
Ian

http://www.ianbuzz.com/fa09.mp3 http://www.ianbuzz.com/fa09.mp3

Posted by EddieZilker on Apr-25-2009 21:50:

It starts of nicely.

The highs are a little on the shrill end. Esp. shakers and hats.

I think the bass-line could use some more grit and presence - it sounds very anemic.

Nice progression, after the bass-line gets introduced.

A few more parts could be added to really round out but keep the hook, where it's at.

Nice modulation on the lead-hook, along with a very cool progression.

Could easily love this tune. Nice work, so far. Looking forward to the finished product.

Posted by IanBuzz on Apr-25-2009 21:58:

Hey thanks Eddie!

Yeah get'n used to my new monitors so i've gotten "too much shaker" b4 so i think i REALLY need to turn it down now

I see what you're talking about on the bass line, I had a really gritty sawtooth in there in an earlier version but I think it sounded too stereotypical-electro-house so I took it out, maybe i can tastefully re-add it in here and there

Thanks for your suggestions, they're all valid points and I'll definitely keep them in mind

I'll let you know when a "final ver" is done... oh it's never done haha

take care man!

Posted by Mozarts ghost on Apr-27-2009 22:33:

Couldn't get the file!!!

/MG

Posted by Energy Flow on Apr-28-2009 14:52:

Link Broken!!.