My first serious track created in ableton

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Posted by thx_0 on Jun-09-2009 19:33:

My first serious track created in ableton

Hi guys

I've created this track all by my self. I'm sharing this production as I want to get your opinion on it. I will by thankfull if you leave any comments.

Please follow the link below:

http://soundcloud.com/thx_0/vol-08-tab

Posted by Shad0wmaster on Jun-11-2009 04:52:

Question: what reverb did you use? It sounds fantastic!

I feel like the bass is somehow lacking in presence - it needs to have a little more punch/growl to it and assert itself more. (Overdrive effect may be what you're looking for, if you're using Live 8.)

I also think that the synth sounds a little bit plain. It needs something else, like a chorus or a flanger or something to make it stand out more.

At 2:55, I think the beat comes in too abruptly - it needs a white noise sweep or crash cymbal, or some other kind of sweetener.

All in all I just think the arrangement needs a little love, I wish the track as a whole flowed a little better. Has promise though