check out my goa trance tune! criticism wanted!

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Posted by Brownsound on Jul-16-2009 02:32:

check out my goa trance tune! criticism wanted!

worked on this tune for about a week. i was trying to go for a organic sound instead of a metallic psy sound and heres the result. criticism welcome!

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Posted by DJMaytag on Jul-16-2009 03:04:

For about 45 seconds or so you had a great house track going, at around 3:07-3:50 (diggin the bassline, but it seems kinda housey ala the TX-81z "Lately Bass" sound).

Doesn't seem to be in key, like some parts are clashing.

Nice build up to the ending, but some of the stuff in the beginning needs some work.

Where's the snare, BTW?

Posted by Brownsound on Jul-17-2009 01:14:

cool thanks for listening to it!

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For about 45 seconds or so you had a great house track going, at around 3:07-3:50 (diggin the bassline, but it seems kinda housey ala the TX-81z "Lately Bass" sound).

not sure what bass sound that is, but all i used for this track were the FL Studio built-in plug-ins (mainly the TS-404) and Vanguard for the final gated distorted lead.

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Doesn't seem to be in key, like some parts are clashing.

i'll check this out

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Nice build up to the ending, but some of the stuff in the beginning needs some work.

i totally agree on that, after taking a 2 day break from listening to it, i realized that the beginning part doesn't really hold its weight too well.

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Where's the snare, BTW?

the snare doesn't come in until 4:02, dies out at 5:36, then comes back in eventually. and it's a relatively high pitched snare too. i didn't want a typical "snare/clap on beat 2 and 4," instead i was going for the same type of snare off of Hallucinogen - "Shamanix".

Thanx for the compliments!

Posted by KilldaDJ on Jul-18-2009 12:41:

bass kick was a little on the 'flat' side but not a bad tune