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Posted by justme78783 on Aug-06-2009 17:06:

Should i send this to armanda ? Demo preview

Hey guys this is a concept mix ... of a track i plan to finish and send to armada ... it has vocals which i do not own , but other vocals will be added soon , it will be a collaboration with a female singer ! Pls take 1 moment , you help is important to me !

Link : http://www.zshare.net/audio/637241891d4f39d2/


Posted by owien on Aug-06-2009 17:14:

i,m downloading now and will give feedback for you but this post belongs in the production promo forum


Posted by justme78783 on Aug-06-2009 17:18:

quote:
Originally posted by owien
i,m downloading now and will give feedback for you but this post belongs in the production promo forum


thank you buddy ! I think the moderators will send it there ! I posted it here because more people would see my post ,lol


Posted by owien on Aug-06-2009 17:26:

well the track is not to bad but the vocal is out of time so you may want to play around with that. also when it comes to sending tracks to labels like armins it needs to be doing something outstanding to gain interest or sound very much like the tracks signed to them in the firsthand.

so i will say you need more production time under your belt


Posted by justme78783 on Aug-06-2009 17:30:

quote:
Originally posted by owien
well the track is not to bad but the vocal is out of time so you may want to play around with that. also when it comes to sending tracks to labels like armins it needs to be doing something outstanding to gain interest or sound very much like the tracks signed to them in the firsthand.

so i will say you need more production time under your belt


ok thanx mate , the truth is i ve far more better tracks , but they are not at all professional , i agree with you , i just wanted someone to confirm it for me ! Anywayz thanx


Posted by owien on Aug-06-2009 17:41:

no worries not trying to be hard on you but as i said labels like armanda will look for that top end track witch takes time and money if that's the sound you are going for then practice making it


Posted by adi_hanson on Aug-06-2009 17:51:

Mate TBH , this is far too cluttered and i cant really tell what is going on.
#1 - that midbass sound is far to loud
#2 -something is clicking and its annoying
#3 -That plucky nexus thing is far too back in the mix and needs to be more a main part of the tune.

And 4# stop making music so it can be played on a particular label.


Posted by euphoria on Aug-06-2009 18:01:

Too repetative, lead has no real melody, vocals *shakes head no*, it doesnt really go anywhere either....so I'm gonna say keep trying!


Posted by DJ Mikey Mike on Aug-06-2009 20:05:

Armada release some right fucking shite so you may have a good chance with this.


Posted by Subtle on Aug-06-2009 21:01:

Its no good, no labels would take this.


Posted by woscar on Aug-06-2009 21:14:

quote:
Originally posted by DJ Mikey Mike
Armada release some right fucking shite so you may have a good chance with this.


Posted by MrJiveBoJingles on Aug-06-2009 21:23:

You've got some of the basic sounds but it needs to be much more polished. Remember, you're up against thousands of ASOT listeners just like yourself all working to perfectly EQ and compress their saw leads, airy female vocals, and bandpassed intro sounds. Better get cracking on it!


Posted by woscar on Aug-06-2009 21:37:

You should know better than to encourage this shite, JBJ


Posted by Mr.Mystery on Aug-06-2009 22:06:

Please post to the correct forum from now on.

http://tranceaddict.com/forums/foru...p?s=&forumid=74


Posted by orTof�nChiLd on Aug-06-2009 22:19:

its a good tune, just take out the vocals. send it to whoever you like.


Posted by ThaMaestro on Aug-07-2009 08:44:

quote:
Originally posted by DJ Mikey Mike
Armada release some right fucking shite so you may have a good chance with this.


Send it to Armada and they'll release it (indeed).
Send it to Armanda and you'll live happily ever after.


Posted by justme78783 on Aug-07-2009 13:53:

oh thanx guys , i am glad that some of you liked it ! You see lately i ve lost my willpower , and i am making some atemps to make a nice track but i alwayz somehow abandon it lol ! In fact this year was not that good for me in many areas , anywayz !

This is only a concept mix , i mean that i just laid my ideas , thats why you cant hear clearly the sounds !

I d apreciate some ideas , i mean some constructive critisism , e.g what would you expect from this track to have more ?

And btw , if you want you can hear some more of my tracks , this is my youtube channel : http://www.youtube.com/user/justme78783 , i ve somehow managed to have more than 830 subscibers that subscribed because they liked my music ! They are not profesional tracks but i am sure you ll find at least 1 track that you ll like !

Thank you !


P.S next time i ll post it in the right section !


Posted by justme78783 on Aug-07-2009 13:57:

quote:
Originally posted by MrJiveBoJingles
You've got some of the basic sounds but it needs to be much more polished. Remember, you're up against thousands of ASOT listeners just like yourself all working to perfectly EQ and compress their saw leads, airy female vocals, and bandpassed intro sounds. Better get cracking on it!



i ll deffinetely do it buddy , i just am - how can i say it - gathering forces , in order to be able to give my best self in the following months ,

the female vocals have been put there just to give you a feeling of how i plan to make my track , i do not own them !

Thanx for your comment i really do apreciate it !


Posted by swayne21 on Aug-09-2009 06:39:

quote:
Originally posted by Subtle
Its no good, no labels would take this.


that's not true! send it to vandit. it sounds like something paul van dyk would do. fix it up and vandit or some label would definitely take it.

i am not feeling the vocals as they are, maybe too much delay but they are in time. need to improve the mixdown. cheers and good luck to you. ignore the ignorant posts. keep the hope alive.


Posted by justme78783 on Aug-09-2009 12:25:

quote:
Originally posted by swayne21
that's not true! send it to vandit. it sounds like something paul van dyk would do. fix it up and vandit or some label would definitely take it.

i am not feeling the vocals as they are, maybe too much delay but they are in time. need to improve the mixdown. cheers and good luck to you. ignore the ignorant posts. keep the hope alive.


thank you so much buddy ! i ll definately give it a try ! I apreciate it ! Cheers


Posted by Shanez on Aug-09-2009 13:09:

Sounds good, but the beats are off or something djs nightmare, train crash :P


Posted by justme78783 on Aug-09-2009 13:56:

quote:
Originally posted by Shanez
Sounds good, but the beats are off or something djs nightmare, train crash :P


as i ve said be4 , this is just a concept , no mastering , no pollishing etc has been done in this track , simply i ve laid my ideas ! Thanx for your comment


Posted by Nurdy South on Aug-10-2009 10:48:

Dude, you should probably learn how to spell the labels name right before pinning your career dreams on signing with them.



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