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Posted by Anakratis on Sep-13-2009 04:43:

[Trance] Anakratis - LUX

Hey guys, this is my newest song! Hope you like it! Please give me some feedback on what I should change. Hey, at 15, I'm still learning

LUX (Rev023) by Anakratis

EDIT:

Rev-023

-Changed "Pluck" Sounds

Thanks!

Posted by Waza on Sep-13-2009 10:30:

your bass is a little muddy and to much reverb going through it.

but at 15 pretty good keep it up the good work

Posted by TranceLover007 on Sep-13-2009 18:08:

Hi Anakratis,

Where is this track, I can not select it???.

Please re-post this again.

Posted by Anakratis on Sep-13-2009 18:12:

quote:
Originally posted by TranceLover007
Hi Anakratis,

Where is this track, I can not select it???.

Please re-post this again.

Sorry about this, I was updating the song

Posted by TranceLover007 on Sep-13-2009 19:30:

Hi man,

For 15 this is fantastic, I like the atmosphere, tension and well coordinated drums with base. If any suggestion, I would experiment with more new sound for FX and solo on your synt. I'm impress.
Another grate "young" artist (producer). keep it rolling.

Future is bright for you.

Posted by Anakratis on Sep-14-2009 21:46:

New update (Rev 023). Hopefully sounds better

Posted by Nightshift on Sep-14-2009 21:59:

did you delete it?

Posted by Anakratis on Sep-14-2009 22:04:

quote:
Originally posted by Nightshift
did you delete it?

No sorry, it just took about HALF-AN-HOUR to create "waveform"...

Posted by TranceLover007 on Sep-14-2009 22:51:

Hi Anakratis,

Overall much better sound. Big step in right direction.
Couple of suggestion for you if you care:

- synt in 3:32 could sound more hmmmmm -different, is to bright (but not to bad)

- synt in 5:24 I would improve to be more smooth, deeper sound.

Try mixing vol level for different synts, that should improve overall quality of your track (cleaner sound structure).

I like and do not take this to personal if you don't like it.
This is only my 2 cents.

Posted by Anakratis on Sep-14-2009 23:10:

quote:
Originally posted by TranceLover007
Hi Anakratis,

Overall much better sound. Big step in right direction.
Couple of suggestion for you if you care:

- synt in 3:32 could sound more hmmmmm -different, is to bright (but not to bad)

- synt in 5:24 I would improve to be more smooth, deeper sound.

Try mixing vol level for different synts, that should improve overall quality of your track (cleaner sound structure).

I like and do not take this to personal if you don't like it.
This is only my 2 cents.

Thank you for the suggestions! I will definitely incorporate these into the track.

Posted by Nightshift on Sep-14-2009 23:15:

This is nice for being just 15 but nothing about this track stuck out for me. Pretty generic stuff, nothing too special. Mixing is okay, quite clunky and muddy though.

Keep workin at it though its good stuff, you're on the right track.

I see you use Ableton 8 as well so maybe a collaboration sometime?

Posted by Nightshift on Sep-14-2009 23:16:

p.s. im following u on soundcloud.

Posted by Anakratis on Sep-15-2009 00:39:

quote:
Originally posted by Nightshift
Pretty generic stuff, nothing too special. Mixing is okay, quite clunky and muddy though.

Please elaborate. I would love to know what is not generic in your opinion. And about the mixing part, I haven't worked on mixing at all yet, so that is yet to come.

quote:
Originally posted by Nightshift
I see you use Ableton 8 as well so maybe a collaboration sometime?

Possibly

Posted by Nightshift on Sep-15-2009 01:02:

quote:
Originally posted by Anakratis
Please elaborate. I would love to know what is not generic in your opinion.

Well what i mean is it does not make me want to listen to it multiple times. Nothing really caught my interest that would make this track stick in my mind, this is what i mean.

Could be differnet for others though.

However you have shown great potential and as said before i believe you are on the right track.