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Posted by BTG on Nov-08-2009 04:24:

critique my song

i know i'll get a lot of 'this song sucks' kinda things..but if i get a couple of pointers i'll be happy.

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btw:

my song isn't finished..but i'm fucking stuck on this ****** of a song.

i dont know where to go.

Posted by floyd741 on Nov-08-2009 14:32:

needs moar analogue

Posted by winston on Nov-08-2009 15:18:

song needs moar wings and beer

Posted by Tom Smykowski on Nov-08-2009 19:25:

hmm, lets see.. the snare should have automation on the decay or something, bass needs alot of eq'ing, less treble/mid and more sub-bass.. lead at 01:02 sounds very drowned out, maybe try a pluck with a longish sustain..
pads are nice very dark
the beat is a little simple, only on 8ths, very deadmau5, try some shuffly small sounds to liven it up a bit..

Posted by Tom Smykowski on Nov-08-2009 19:26:

oh, and a little reverb automation never killed anyone!