New Trance Track- JoshthebeaR- Celestial Twilight (demo)

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Posted by Joshthebear on Jan-06-2010 20:53:

New Trance Track- JoshthebeaR- Celestial Twilight (demo)

http://soundcloud.com/dj-intrigued/...estial-twilight

Check it out... tell me what you guys think!!!

Posted by Grazba on Jan-07-2010 10:46:

hey josh !! first things first !! the melody is cool ^^ really even if its repeated many times !!! your track could be Great !!

the CRITICS :
- your intro and outro ARE BAAD !! (fade in and fade out ) but its a demo maybe u'll change it !

-your DRUMS are weak bekoze your samples are weak try to find out good kicks and all that stuff !

-your build up need to revised !!

that's all hope mmy critics help you !! cheers

Posted by Joshthebear on Jan-07-2010 19:44:

ya man thank you..

yea that is not the full track it is jus main section. why it is faded in n out at beginning and end.

i will def go back and look at all that.

ty

Posted by Nicolas Oliver on Jan-07-2010 22:22:

You need a much stronger kick IMO.

Posted by chrisspob on Jan-09-2010 01:36:

hi josh for me its real hard to comment i dont have a clue where this track is going its the same alway through and the progressions dont really do much for me but i guess if your new to making music this aint bad to what ive heard, i agree beefier kick needed tho and good luck keep at it