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Posted by pkcRAISTLIN on Jan-18-2010 22:04:

would you call the police?

One of my best friend�s employees just circulated this poem around the office. I suggested he call the police, because it looks fairly self-explanatory to me!

quote:

Stranded in darkness I stand,
Alone and tormented,
Seven who have dared to torment,
Seven to reap what they have sowed.

Three more to come,
Three who will dare to try,
Where seven have failed,
To bind me against my will.

Where bribes have failed.
Lies and deception they weave.
In the hope that those around me,
continue to do as they please.

A truth that I know.
A truth that I can't speak.
A truth that needs to be told.

When you perceive that a network surrounds you and only you and that no one around you can talk to you about it. It becomes one of the most loneliest experiences, in a sense, a darkness. The greatest problem I found is that I'm afraid to speak about it, out loud. My other fears are of a life bind to a society and a government that I don't want to be bound to. Since it's only perception, there is no proof to what I've written, no certainty, only some doubt.

However if I am right, what I need, what I long for, is not only the destruction of the network, but to also have all my liberties restored.

That just reads like someone preparing to go postal imo.

Posted by nefardec on Jan-18-2010 22:06:

w ashley is a better writer than i gave him credit for.

sounds like a lord of the rings poem though

seven rings for the blah blah blah

$10 says when he does it he does it with an elven scimitar

Posted by Sushipunk on Jan-18-2010 22:07:

Lol

Yeah, definitely weird as fuck. I'd call the cops if it were one of my employees.

Posted by igottaknow on Jan-18-2010 22:23:

I would call an English professor. Maybe with a little luck he'll be able to help him improve his proses.

Posted by kadomony on Jan-18-2010 22:33:

i say just keep quiet about it

Posted by EricB. on Jan-18-2010 22:47:

its poetry
you dont even know if thats how HE feels.

real artist dont worry about how they feel they write about how someone else may feel in a certain situation.

perception is a wonderful thing

Posted by Simon_N on Jan-18-2010 23:03:

Why the fuck would you considering calling the cops over a poem????

Posted by infiniteJEST on Jan-18-2010 23:03:

It's clearly an analysis of Wienerschnitzel's 2 for $3 deal.

Posted by Schadenfreude on Jan-18-2010 23:07:

i would shoot him in the face even if it is innocent because poetry is for faggots.

Posted by pkcRAISTLIN on Jan-18-2010 23:24:

quote:
Originally posted by Simon_N
Why the fuck would you considering calling the cops over a poem????

Yeah, you should wait until after the massacre to call them.

Posted by D-res on Jan-18-2010 23:51:

Just give the guy a tin foil hat

Posted by Ania_xox on Jan-19-2010 00:04:

Oh! season of mists;
And mellow fruitlessness.

Posted by EricB. on Jan-19-2010 00:36:

quote:
Originally posted by Ania_xox
Oh! season of mists;
And mellow fruitlessness.

COPS!

Posted by wienerschnitzel on Jan-19-2010 01:29:

quote:
Originally posted by couch-potato
It's clearly an analysis of Wienerschnitzel's 2 for $3 deal.

i hope you're talking about that nasty food chain in the US and not my backyard rub and tug..

Posted by Sushipunk on Jan-19-2010 01:31:

quote:
Originally posted by wienerschnitzel
i hope you're talking about that nasty food chain in the US and not my backyard rub and tug..

I thought the rub and tug was across the road from you? You lied to us Weiner!

Posted by wienerschnitzel on Jan-19-2010 01:32:

it is mine is just better..

Posted by Sushipunk on Jan-19-2010 01:33:

quote:
Originally posted by wienerschnitzel
it is mine is just better..

Oh.

Well, fair play then.

Posted by woscar on Jan-19-2010 01:35:

Police? Call the press.

Posted by SYSTEM-J on Jan-19-2010 02:34:

quote:
Originally posted by nefardec
w ashley is a better writer than i gave him credit for.

********'s "fate of trance" post was the best piece of poetry I've read since Pound's "In A Station of the Metro".

This, however, is just shit emo-poetry. If this kind of crap were evidence of homocidal thoughts, there'd be a school shooting every Monday.

Posted by Lomeli on Jan-19-2010 02:58:

quote:
Originally posted by SYSTEM-J
********'s "fate of trance" post was the best piece of poetry I've read since Pound's "In A Station of the Metro".
.

Link?

Posted by SYSTEM-J on Jan-19-2010 03:12:

quote:
Originally posted by Lomeli
Link?

quote:
Originally posted by ********
If You had the fate of trance in your hand...

I would consider more closely that the doctor is right in thinking I am delusional, and resolve why it is just one hand and not two. Make a mantra what is the sound of one hand holding the fate of trance.

and meditate closely waiting for a voice from above to guide me, and not tell the doctor what I am doing or why.

Posted by Lomeli on Jan-19-2010 03:18:

Posted by Aesthetic on Jan-19-2010 03:20:

lol that was awesome. ******** fucking rules.

pkc - tell your mate to ask the guy when 'd-day' is, so he knows to pull a sickie that day

Posted by Dj Nacht on Jan-19-2010 03:22:

Police wont do shit except be confused. Good luck trying to explain to some cop how this poem means the guy is going to go postal. They probably wont even understand it and if you're lucky and one does well good luck to him trying to explain it to other cops.

Posted by Lilith on Jan-19-2010 05:41:

Re: would you call the police?

quote:
Originally posted by pkcRAISTLIN
That just reads like someone preparing to go postal imo.

At least tell us where so I'm not on the 'passers just innocently walking by' nightly news.

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