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E-Spectro ft Trox - You Call It Magic (EZ's Alice in Wonderland Mix)
Eddie Zilker proudly announces... meh.
E-Spectro ft Trox - You Call It Magic (EZ's Alice in Wonderland Mix) by DeepEddieZilker
Meh indeed. 
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| Originally posted by alanzo Meh indeed. |
Holy shit, something less than 10 minutes!?
At first I was like =\
at 1:00 I was like O.o
at 3:46 I was like =)
Can definitely hear the refinement in your work man. Can't wait to hear the mastered version of this...
Everything fit quite well and the verbed chorus was v. nice. The zilker influence is quite apparent.
Wish the scratchy rolls were a bit more pronounced though, and in my beyers, the snare could use slightly more punch/snap/clarity. (whatever "scratchy roll" instrument that is @ 6:00 for example, it's nice, I just wish I could hear slightly more of it...and do I detect a hint of cowbell? :O)
My observations are on SC sir.
Cheers, looks like we have a winner
Darek
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| Originally posted by theterran Holy shit, something less than 10 minutes!? At first I was like =\ at 1:00 I was like O.o at 3:46 I was like =) Can definitely hear the refinement in your work man. Can't wait to hear the mastered version of this... Everything fit quite well and the verbed chorus was v. nice. The zilker influence is quite apparent. Wish the scratchy rolls were a bit more pronounced though, and in my beyers, the snare could use slightly more punch/snap/clarity. (whatever "scratchy roll" instrument that is @ 6:00 for example, it's nice, I just wish I could hear slightly more of it...and do I detect a hint of cowbell? :O) |
Oh, to clear any possible confusion : By more I mean volumetriclly, like it's fking quiet, almost non-existenet even at 100% volume in my headphones. It becomes more audible around 7:21. (I believe the instrument I was searching for is Guiro)
Maybe try 0.5-1 db more in the louder part of the mix @ 6. (no that's not a math problem and I do not mean -.5 db more)
It's quite cool, and if you did put all that work into it and it's not just a guiro, why bury it?
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| Originally posted by theterran It's quite cool, and if you did put all that work into it and it's not just a guiro, why bury it? |
Dark, brooding, and intense. I kept getting the feeling that a cat was about to pounce on my neck. In other words, yeah, I like it! It definitely sets a nice mood and has EZ quality all over it. My only nit is that it felt like it could use a break or a fill or sweep, etc. to bring the vocals back in after the long middle section. Maybe a reverse vocal build???
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| Originally posted by cryophonik Dark, brooding, and intense. I kept getting the feeling that a cat was about to pounce on my neck. In other words, yeah, I like it! It definitely sets a nice mood and has EZ quality all over it. My only nit is that it felt like it could use a break or a fill or sweep, etc. to bring the vocals back in after the long middle section. Maybe a reverse vocal build??? |


I Like the dark vibe, first 2 minutes not much happens, and most vocals which have been "re-alligned" are not realy "re-alligned" timing there is way off. can't comment the mix itself yet as i am on my laptop, but it sounds nice 'n warm. Will give it a good listen in my studio tonight.
Overall good instrumental, nice vocal FX (triplet echo delay with 100% feeback low pass filtered), but vocal timing / (lack of) time stretching is not so good 
I'd call this another grown up mix. As in somebody that knows what they're doing
Very moody.
Everything is well balanced, but i've noteiced the last couple of things you've posted sound like very good headphone mixes. There's some detail missing to the top end? 
Don't get me wrong, i like the mix, only the placement of the vocals are way of the grid, sound like they are not timestretched, they run slower and just loose sync over 8 measures.
also on some pieces i hear them pushed forward a bit, and "sort of" feel the intended groove, but because off the grid again, it doesn't work for me. It's not "loose" timing, it's "no" timing 
Eddie you are a class one wanksplash.
Just as I thought I might be starting to sound half pro, along comes this masterpiece to fuk me in the ass.
Seriously cool, and I mean cool work with an extra side helping of cool.
Tell you what really impreses me - the originality and style.
It's just stylish.
Your best work by a country mile you wanka.
No crits at all and in fact I love the loose organic nature of the vocals. Actualy one tiny stupid crit - the main hat loop FOR me was slighty repetitios (sp)
Nice
I agree with Richard in regards to this being up there with your best. I particularly enjoy the vocal treatment you've cooked up here, especially the low passed vocals and cuts/chops. But I also agree with him in that the hat loop becomes a bit tedious, for my ears at least.
What strikes me even more than the vocal manipulation is the subtle melodies that surround the track. I'm in love with them.
You're well and truly on a roll lately Mr Zilker. I think you should consider contacting one of Dave's ladies and propose commencing a collaboration project
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| Originally posted by Raphie in his thread ThnX Eddy, BTW, can you explain me your vocals in your magic wonderland remix? I can not get my head around it why they are placed as they are, i understand the delayed verbs and the chorus /bridge later in the song, but what acts as verses, i can't relate them to any groove? and they really sound like they are in a different tempo there. running in and out of sync. For me that's really the one thing that craving to be corrected, for the rest the mix is impressive. But i seem to be the only one not getting it? |

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| Originally posted by tehlord I'd call this another grown up mix. As in somebody that knows what they're doing Very moody. |
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| Originally posted by tehlord Everything is well balanced, but i've noteiced the last couple of things you've posted sound like very good headphone mixes. There's some detail missing to the top end? |
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| Originally posted by Richard Butler Eddie you are a class one wanksplash. Just as I thought I might be starting to sound half pro, along comes this masterpiece to fuk me in the ass. Seriously cool, and I mean cool work with an extra side helping of cool. Tell you what really impreses me - the originality and style. It's just stylish. Your best work by a country mile you wanka. No crits at all and in fact I love the loose organic nature of the vocals. Actualy one tiny stupid crit - the main hat loop FOR me was slighty repetitios (sp) Nice |
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| Originally posted by Owsey2008 I agree with Richard in regards to this being up there with your best. I particularly enjoy the vocal treatment you've cooked up here, especially the low passed vocals and cuts/chops. But I also agree with him in that the hat loop becomes a bit tedious, for my ears at least. What strikes me even more than the vocal manipulation is the subtle melodies that surround the track. I'm in love with them. You're well and truly on a roll lately Mr Zilker. I think you should consider contacting one of Dave's ladies and propose commencing a collaboration project |
Eddie, I've listened to a few of your productions now, including Cop Rocked (incidentally, a dubstep producer already used that sample) and about half of your last concept album. I've refrained from commenting until now, but having heard this mix I'm going to be open with you.
I'm no producer so I'm not going to talk technical. I think you know your sound isn't up to professional scratch, and I'm in no position to tell you how to fix that. I'm talking just as a listener. And man, you just do not seem to understand basslines or rhythms at all. This is supposed to be a house record, right? You've even got the DJ friendly intro and outro, adding and subtracting layers. If this isn't supposed to be a dancefloor record it's an extremely unimaginative structure, because if this isn't made to be mixed, it's made to be heard in full, and long sections of it are pointless. I hope you haven't just structured this track like that because you've listened to too many dance records to envisage a musical reality that doesn't build and fall in such a painfully linear fashion.
But if we accept that this is a dance track, how the fuck is anyone supposed to dance to it? There's no groove, no drive, no snap and no crackle at all. Where's the bassline? I haven't heard a remotely interesting bassline on any of your tracks so far. The beat is completely insipid. It sounds like a parody "techno remix" you'd download from P2P in 2001.
I see a lot of people calling it "moody" and I can buy into the idea there is a decent vibe lurking somewhere in here. But I cannot accept any defence that this is supposed to appropriate dancefloor conventions for a home listening context. That's a cop out. If you're going to put such prominent percussion in there, it has to be interesting. This beat isn't interesting to listen to and it'd never be interesting to dance to. Furthermore, don't appropriate DJ-friendly structures. Some producers have adapted the add-and-subtract dynamics of club records into sweeping, successful home listening albums. You haven't.
This is probably excessively harsh and for that I apologise, but I'd rather put it plainly. I don't think your problem is technical. I listen to your music and I hear a lot of elements that seem to be there purely for the sake of it, without any real consideration as to why they're necessary or what effect they're creating. That's a creative problem.
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| Originally posted by SYSTEM-J Eddie, I've listened to a few of your productions now, including Cop Rocked (incidentally, a dubstep producer already used that sample) and about half of your last concept album. I've refrained from commenting until now, but having heard this mix I'm going to be open with you. I'm no producer so I'm not going to talk technical. I think you know your sound isn't up to professional scratch, and I'm in no position to tell you how to fix that. I'm talking just as a listener. And man, you just do not seem to understand basslines or rhythms at all. This is supposed to be a house record, right? You've even got the DJ friendly intro and outro, adding and subtracting layers. If this isn't supposed to be a dancefloor record it's an extremely unimaginative structure, because if this isn't made to be mixed, it's made to be heard in full, and long sections of it are pointless. I hope you haven't just structured this track like that because you've listened to too many dance records to envisage a musical reality that doesn't build and fall in such a painfully linear fashion. But if we accept that this is a dance track, how the fuck is anyone supposed to dance to it? There's no groove, no drive, no snap and no crackle at all. Where's the bassline? I haven't heard a remotely interesting bassline on any of your tracks so far. The beat is completely insipid. It sounds like a parody "techno remix" you'd download from P2P in 2001. I see a lot of people calling it "moody" and I can buy into the idea there is a decent vibe lurking somewhere in here. But I cannot accept any defence that this is supposed to appropriate dancefloor conventions for a home listening context. That's a cop out. If you're going to put such prominent percussion in there, it has to be interesting. This beat isn't interesting to listen to and it'd never be interesting to dance to. Furthermore, don't appropriate DJ-friendly structures. Some producers have adapted the add-and-subtract dynamics of club records into sweeping, successful home listening albums. You haven't. This is probably excessively harsh and for that I apologise, but I'd rather put it plainly. I don't think your problem is technical. I listen to your music and I hear a lot of elements that seem to be there purely for the sake of it, without any real consideration as to why they're necessary or what effect they're creating. That's a creative problem. |
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| Originally posted by EddieZilker As for intent, be it a presumption to have it suited for a particular genre or for it to be "dance" material or otherwise: I'm not really thinking in that paradigm, at all. Do I want to create tension, drive and groove? Yes, definitely. But what those are and how they're achieved remain subjective and my target-market is slightly less substantiated than you seem to be giving me credit for. |
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| I prefer commencing with the consideration of an effect. Keeping originality always in view- for he is false to himself who ventures to dispense with so obvious and so easily attainable a source of interest- I say to myself, in the first place, "Of the innumerable effects, or impressions, of which the heart, the intellect, or (more generally) the soul is susceptible, what one shall I, on the present occasion, select?" |
i rarely comment on other people's work, but i felt like i had to say something after reading system-j's candid critique-
while it lacks an organized structure which could perhaps equate into what he had mentioned about (iirc) a "central idea" or whatever, i don't think this production is bad, or at least as bad as he implies. jack, i thought your critique was quite a bit harsh, but that's me. it's definitely not the direction i would've taken with it, and again it lacks organization and recognizable phrasing (the perc's being a major culprit, imo) but you've polished its soundscape nicely and i enjoyed listening through it. in particular i liked what you did with the vocals, especially in regards to the looping/reverb "sweeping" effects and using them as an ambience/headroom filler to give an ethereal, dark feel throughout the track..
i wasn't feeling the bassline either, did you purposely create that loop in a different key to add tension to the track or give it a darker feel? it's a common practice in tech-house and techno, but not so much in vocal house..
that's all i have to say. let the heated discussion continue. lol
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| Originally posted by SYSTEM-J Your problem is you're not really thinking in any paradigm at all. You seem to be confusing creative freedom with a lack of focus. You don't need to substantiate your "target-market". It sounds to me like you're being facetious and implying I'm thinking too much about how this track can sell copies. This is a defence mechanism - you're telling yourself that you are thinking creatively rather than commercially, which is why it doesn't matter that your track doesn't fit a functional paradigm. That's not what I mean. What I'm telling you is that you don't have a clear idea what this track is meant to do, and so too many elements sound either superfluous or rote. And I get this impression repeatedly from your work. It's a different art-form, but something I take into everything artistic I do, from a short story to a DJ mix, is advice from Edgar Allen Poe's essay Philosophy Of Composition: Poe argues that the artist should begin by deciding on which effect he/she wants to create with the work, and every other decision, from genre and form downwards, should be informed by this initial decision and aim to facilitate the chosen effect. I think your music generally lacks strong controlling ideas. And I know you come up with fancy little concepts for your albums, but when Poe talks about "effect" he's not talking about structural games, he's talking about the emotional punch of your work. And please, don't pull this subjective card on me. I know what it's like to make something and have people find things in it you never intended to be there. I've been in a workshop where 15 different people have given me feedback on something I've written, and everyone has failed to understand a different part of it. Your bottom ends are atrocious, and claiming that's my subjective opinion is only papering over the most serious weakness in your craft. |
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| Originally posted by Omega_Blue i rarely comment on other people's work, but i felt like i had to say something after reading system-j's candid critique- while it lacks an organized structure which could perhaps equate into what he had mentioned about (iirc) a "central idea" or whatever, i don't think this production is bad, or at least as bad as he implies. jack, i thought your critique was quite a bit harsh, but that's me. it's definitely not the direction i would've taken with it, and again it lacks organization and recognizable phrasing (the perc's being a major culprit, imo) but you've polished its soundscape nicely and i enjoyed listening through it. in particular i liked what you did with the vocals, especially in regards to the looping/reverb "sweeping" effects and using them as an ambience/headroom filler to give an ethereal, dark feel throughout the track.. i wasn't feeling the bassline either, did you purposely create that loop in a different key to add tension to the track or give it a darker feel? it's a common practice in tech-house and techno, but not so much in vocal house.. that's all i have to say. let the heated discussion continue. lol |
(Well, I have.)
I'm trying to come up with two possibilities for why you've included such poor beats and bass. One is that you weren't really interested in how danceable this track is, which is where the Poe would come in. Because if this isn't really about being danceable, why is the kick drum the first and most prominent sound on the track? How does the percussion in this track accentuate the overall effect? Is the percussion really interesting and engaging enough to justify its constant presence in the track?
The other possibility is you just can't really put together a funky groove. Just turn it up nice and loud and consider whether it makes you want to dance. There's a complete lack of bassline, which sucks the energy out of the track (meaning it lacks aforementioned drive) and denies you a key musical element the dancer responds to. I can sort of hearing it coming through early on in the track but it's still not any kind of bassline that makes me want to bob my head. I don't think you're so completely lacking in da funk that you'd seriously think this is an acceptable dancefloor bottom end.
I had a similar issue with Superstition. I was going to ask why you'd bothered putting a constant bassline in, when the bass was so perfunctory and secondary. You seem to have a taste for tracks that comprise shuffly, vague breakbeat patterns and muddy or extremely uninteresting basslines, above which you have many more subtle and interesting elements trickling past, generating muted atmospheres that slowly evolve over the course of the track. I'm just struggling to figure out whether you just don't have any intrinsic sense of rhythm or whether you're putting these pointless rhythmic elements in for their own sake.
So System-J what do you think of my version then?
Eddie, the "remixpack" is kind of wonkey and needs some preperation in order to become useful, since the vocals are already loosely timed and most people don't know how to calculate a BMP anymore, they strugle finding the tempo and start chopping around in frustration. As you can hear on the several SC remixes
My version has the original wav, begin to end, no chops, no timing or pitching artifacts. So it CAN be done. also on vocal clarity, i've done A LOT of processing to get the vocal nailed into place dynamics wise and mask the exorbitant vibrato in something more bearable.
One either likes what i did with them (or hates it
) but there is nothing "wrong" with the vocals.
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