Critique my (not commercial) hiphop beat

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Posted by mathieu on Apr-27-2011 19:54:

Critique my (not commercial) hiphop beat

Hi everyone from the MD, anyone likes hip hop here? I know theres a special section for feedback but I figured id get better feedback here.

Anyways heres the track :

I know I dont post alot on here (almost never), but, I'd like your thoughts on this.
If anyone objects to me posting this kind of stuff here ill understand. I figured id get better feedback here since there prob are a couple hiphop fans in here and id prob get some deeper words than: ''its cool but i think you should put a supersaw on it''

PS: If (by miracle) anyone here wants to rap on it (if its even possible lol) drop me a message here or pm or whatever, ill supply.

Posted by EddieZilker on Apr-27-2011 19:57:

I like this, man. Very cool, jazzy chords and I like the rhythm, too.

http://www.tranceaddict.com/forums/...p?s=&forumid=74

Here might be a better place for it (but I suspect you may have known that so do as you will).

Posted by Zak McKracken on Apr-27-2011 20:00:

cool soulfunk there dude. dont ruin it with vocals.

Posted by mathieu on Apr-27-2011 20:02:

Thanks ! Yes i've posted it here on purpose. That stefan goldmann thread in the producers section inspired me to do so. I thought that some feedback from the people here might be interesting. Tho, I dont want to pollute this section with feedback requests. Gonna have to find a solution.

Posted by Zak McKracken on Apr-27-2011 20:55:

quote:
Originally posted by mathieu
Thanks ! Yes i've posted it here on purpose. That stefan goldmann thread in the producers section inspired me to do so. I thought that some feedback from the people here might be interesting. Tho, I dont want to pollute this section with feedback requests. Gonna have to find a solution.

make an alt and post it from that alt and say you just found it and love it and wonder if anyone else love it too lol. thats what others do.

Posted by osterzone on Apr-28-2011 03:50:

More reverb needed for the background wouldn't hurt.

Also the drums sound really artificial. What did you make this with?

Posted by LAdazeNYnights on Apr-28-2011 05:49:

i really dig it man nice work

Posted by daphunky1 on Apr-28-2011 05:53:

I dig it. I don't know much an out technical production but the 3rd beat/note sounds a bit jarring when it is full on. Smooth that out a bit and other than that finish it off into a nice 3 minute track!