`Benjamin Nuron - Theme To Life (Original Mix)` [[Needing Feedback Pls]]

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Posted by luben on Jul-26-2011 22:03:

`Benjamin Nuron - Theme To Life (Original Mix)` [[Needing Feedback Pls]]

Thank you for taking a look, Im hoping to put this as the 3rd track to an EP ive been working on but just wanted to run it by a few people to get a little feedback..

Thank you in advance

Benjamin Nuron - Theme To Life (Original Mix) by Alias Promotions

Posted by Nightly on Jul-27-2011 08:32:

I like it, the breakdown is awesome, very emotional. Is this your own work or sampled?
It sounds very Thomas Newman-ish.

Only thing I might add is that I think more could be done with the track to turn it into a really great track!

Posted by Richard Butler on Jul-27-2011 16:09:

This has a perfect sound for me, until after the first mini break when that other muddy base joins in.

The break for me does not really go with this very techy dancey vibe (the vibe prior to that other bass joining).

Could be good if you re - think, but as ever it's all down to taste so really take NO notice of my feedback mate.

Loving than damned intro mate

Posted by luben on Jul-28-2011 15:23:

thats not a problem mate, i need feedback in order to progress. all comments are taken on board.

the break was the original piece i was playing about with creating, so i spent a few hours trying to mould the film score sounding piece into a techy sounding house track..

i just wanted a few comments to see if people thought it was worth sitting down and pushing forward with it. im very new to the producing side of things.

no nightly no samples.

Posted by daveashe on Jul-28-2011 20:08:

Ok, here is some feedback.

You know what is missing for me is the little bells and whistles to keep the interest (fx / modular sounds) especially in the break, it needs some filtered noise with a reverb/stereo delay for sure. Either that or add some high-passed rhythms/breakbeats that come in and out from time to time.

I think the timing of the double hat isn't quite right, its maybe a couple of ticks off.

The bass needs to be sidechained to the kick or high-passed a little as its a bit muddy, it doesn't sound quite right on my HFI-780 headphones that have a really good sub-bass response.

Posted by luben on Jul-29-2011 23:58:

Cheers mate, i think i will strip it back down and have a more in depth play with it.