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Posted by paulazizeh on Sep-02-2011 05:01:

New track uploaded

Hey guys, I just wanted to share with you a new track I've remixed. You guys are more than welcome to give me feedback on the track so I can make my tracks better and definitely give me feedback on how to create more of an acid/driving bassline. I just bought sylenth1 and haven't used it yet but going to dip into it and try it out. Thanks guys in advance.

Paul Azizeh


Kwality Kontrol - Don't Stop (Paul Azizeh Remix)


Posted by sicc on Sep-03-2011 16:28:

To be honest, I love the bassline and the kick, and the thin pad playing, but, the vocals startled me when they came in. I really like the kick and the bass line, maybe add some heavier phas0r or a bit of distortion to get that acid sound. I've been using sylenth for a while now and I love it, have fun with it!


Posted by paulazizeh on Sep-03-2011 21:10:

Sicc,

Thank you for your feedback on the kick and the bassline. Next time I'll some heavier phasor or some distortion, I'll with both effect to work with the basslines. As far as vocals go, how did the vocals startle you? Were they too loud, too quiet? I want to get more specific input about the vocals so I can make sure to fix them when I make another track with vocals but for now I'll work on the vocals a little bit and the basslines.

Again, I really appreciate your input, means a lot.

Thanks

Paul Azizeh


Posted by sicc on Sep-04-2011 06:31:

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Originally posted by paulazizeh
Sicc,

Thank you for your feedback on the kick and the bassline. Next time I'll some heavier phasor or some distortion, I'll with both effect to work with the basslines. As far as vocals go, how did the vocals startle you? Were they too loud, too quiet? I want to get more specific input about the vocals so I can make sure to fix them when I make another track with vocals but for now I'll work on the vocals a little bit and the basslines.

Again, I really appreciate your input, means a lot.

Thanks

Paul Azizeh



The vocals startled me because they seemed to abruptly enter the track, and were a bit loud. but then again thats just my opinion, others may feel different. Maybe ease into the vocals a bit, subtle entrance yet strongly present or something to that effect. And no problem, we all need feedback to improve! good luck,

EDIT - just lisnted to it again, and the vocals ease in nicely, but its right when she begins saying "no no no", specifically on the first no, that it seems to hurt the ears a bit. just my thoughts on it! Her voice is piercing, a bit loud.

peace.


Posted by paulazizeh on Sep-04-2011 17:27:

I appreciate it man. I'll work on those again and lower the volume a little and have a final listen. Again, I appreciate the feedback sicc.

For the future, if you wanted me to listen to any of your stuff, let me know.

Thanks again

Paul Azizeh



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