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Posted by artem2222 on Nov-08-2011 15:53:

criticism welcomed

just made this yesterday, wanted to get some feedback from you guys. Ill take anything I can get.

http://soundcloud.com/rtmofficial/rtm-eff-the-viva

Posted by ptransmission on Nov-08-2011 17:20:

nice track, I like the reverse clap thing. The swells/white noise are a bit loud imo though!

be sure to check my tune man, return the favour!

http://soundcloud.com/project_trans...ission-definite

nice stuff anyway, keep it up,
Project Transmission

Posted by artem2222 on Nov-08-2011 20:28:

i think soundcloud might be down, ill check back in a few

Posted by ptransmission on Nov-08-2011 20:39:

cheers mate

Posted by artem2222 on Nov-08-2011 22:57:

lovin the melody and the nice pads underneath. I am no sound engineer but your mix sounds pretty damn good. track skipped a few times, im thinking that might have just happened during the upload process. bass sounded a little too raspy for me during the breakdown but maybe you are going for that kind of thing. Overall pretty impressed, considering that this isn't really my style of music.

Posted by Richard Butler on Nov-08-2011 23:28:

RTEM, quite a nice track but I agree the sweeps are a bit loud and also the clap is not gelled into the track. Try and make the main deadmau synth more distinctive as it sounds too 'straight out the tin' just now. I'd recommend careful use of saturated valve simulations to help achieve this.

Nice n clear mix.

The other guy - thats quite a unique track and has some good vibe to it.

Posted by artem2222 on Nov-09-2011 00:27:

thank you both for the replies, will be making some changes tonight.

Posted by sylvannas on Nov-09-2011 05:12:

quote:
Originally posted by ptransmission
nice track, I like the reverse clap thing. The swells/white noise are a bit loud imo though!

be sure to check my tune man, return the favour!

http://soundcloud.com/project_trans...ission-definite

nice stuff anyway, keep it up,
Project Transmission

I loved your track man...more reverb

Posted by ptransmission on Nov-09-2011 23:02:

quote:
Originally posted by Richard Butler
I'd recommend careful use of saturated valve simulations to help achieve this.

I know I'm sort of hijacking the thread (sorry!) but this is a good piece of advice, I like it

quote:
Originally posted by sylvannas
I loved your track man...more reverb

Ah, thanks very much man!