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A Dolman - "Tranquility" [Club Mix]

Here is my new track guys. Still have a few bits and pieces to work on at the moment, but I would love some feedback.

Let me know what you think.

I really hope you enjoy hearing it as much as I did making it

http://soundcloud.com/aldol-1/a-dol...nquility-club-1


UPDATED VERSION HERE - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CMa5YXjzhy0


If you like my sound, please do follow along on soundcloud, or youtube (adolman89 is my channel) it would be great to share ideas on how to improve.

Thanks.

Hi,
That sidechained mid bass saw is really in you face loud, kinda makes everything become lost. I'm feeling a Matt Zo type of feel to this track. Nice break, and the piano sounds great. And the kick isnt really piercing through the mid bass saw, try cutting a notch on most present sounds where your kick is peaking. I'd get a new kick sample tbh.

Great song thou, really nice and anjuna-ish

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Originally posted by Julz Hi, That sidechained mid bass saw is really in you face loud, kinda makes everything become lost. I'm feeling a Matt Zo type of feel to this track. Nice break, and the piano sounds great. And the kick isnt really piercing through the mid bass saw, try cutting a notch on most present sounds where your kick is peaking. I'd get a new kick sample tbh. Great song thou, really nice and anjuna-ish

I agree totally... love the idea of the tune doh... keep working on it...

I think a nice automation (preferably a reverb) on the synth at the start of the song from 0:00 - 0:25 would sound nice.. slowly bring the sound alive...

Timmy and Tommy - Full Tiltin (Joint Operations Centre remix
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FG88kmJXR9I

Listen to the first minute of this song.. Kinda explains better what im tryin to say

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Originally posted by Julz Hi, That sidechained mid bass saw is really in you face loud, kinda makes everything become lost. I'm feeling a Matt Zo type of feel to this track. Nice break, and the piano sounds great. And the kick isnt really piercing through the mid bass saw, try cutting a notch on most present sounds where your kick is peaking. I'd get a new kick sample tbh. Great song thou, really nice and anjuna-ish

Hey man, thanks for your feedback!

The anjuna style trance is my favourite, so I think that has influenced my style of production, thanks for the kind words there bro.

Yeah I agree, after feedback from some other producers, the consensus appears to be that the saw is slightly too loud. I did want a fat saw on the drop though, so I may just reduce the volume slightly and tweak the levels in the high frequency region to improve the mix.

With the kick I have one other sample I was going to use which is a lot more hard hitting. When I upload all my additions, I may pop two tracks up with different kicks and you could let me know what you think?

Thanks

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Originally posted by Wipperjaw I agree totally... love the idea of the tune doh... keep working on it... I think a nice automation (preferably a reverb) on the synth at the start of the song from 0:00 - 0:25 would sound nice.. slowly bring the sound alive... Timmy and Tommy - Full Tiltin (Joint Operations Centre remix http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FG88kmJXR9I Listen to the first minute of this song.. Kinda explains better what im tryin to say

Thanks for your feedback mate, really appreciate it

Yeah, I see what you mean. I think if I was to make a "full" version of the track (e.g. 6mins or so) I would definately consider putting that kind of effect in.

Have made some changes based on the response ive had from people in general. Here is a revised version guys.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CMa5YXjzhy0

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