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Posted by closedcircle on Apr-13-2012 19:37:

Closed Circle - Sky Falls Down

I'd appreciate feedback or comments

Posted by EddieZilker on Apr-13-2012 21:34:

It sounds horrendous. The mix is awful, there's something wrong with the timing, too much mastering compression. And, it's your best work, yet.

& my girlfriend wants to know why you sound so much like Mega Man video games.

Posted by Peter Campbell on Apr-13-2012 23:17:

well interesting stuff here,
don't know where to start.
kick and bass boath muddy.
kick and bass not sitting together well.
clap is lost in the mix.
snear buildups are way to loud.
lead synth way to loud.
lead synth way to repetive.
sine bells don't compliment the lead.
vocal is hidden in the mix.
vocal is off key.
vocals out of time.
vocals can't understand them.
melody realy needs looking at, makes no sense and doesn't work with the lead.
song structure lacks variation, dynamics and is extremely repetitive
no high points/climax.
ending has nothing to do with the song.

hope that helps.

Posted by closedcircle on Apr-21-2012 19:11:

Yah, I kinda tweak out the elements of normal standard trance, maybe work more in the genre sometime.

Posted by EddieZilker on Apr-21-2012 19:16:

quote:
Originally posted by closedcircle
Yah, I kinda tweak out the elements of normal standard trance, maybe work more in the genre sometime.

Clearly, it's you trying to sound original that's keeping you from sounding competent.