Looking for some feedback on a WIP trance track

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Posted by Targus28 on Apr-22-2012 22:32:

Looking for some feedback on a WIP trance track

Thanks guys

*Updated

Posted by Targus28 on Apr-23-2012 04:09:

Newer Version up

Posted by TranceLover007 on Apr-25-2012 17:59:

Will try later as looks like SC is down for maintenance lol

See you later.

Cheers,

Darek

Posted by TranceLover007 on Apr-25-2012 19:00:

I like what I'm hearing but for some reason (with this type of music/genre) I don't feel this dynamics and energy in it yet and have now idea why not. There is something missing in this track something which will create/add some nice riff to it and with out it you will really struggle to get some interest from different producers/people.

I thing this concept is really cool but you will need to find the way to get this dynamics up to next level - will try to listen a bit more later and see if I can point you to a specific place to get this issue correct/adjust.

Cheers man,

Darek

Posted by optik on Apr-25-2012 19:13:

I like it so far, but would love to hear what happens next, as most likely I'll be mixing over this bit!

T

Posted by Targus28 on Apr-25-2012 22:10:

quote:
Originally posted by TranceLover007
I like what I'm hearing but for some reason (with this type of music/genre) I don't feel this dynamics and energy in it yet and have now idea why not. There is something missing in this track something which will create/add some nice riff to it and with out it you will really struggle to get some interest from different producers/people.

I thing this concept is really cool but you will need to find the way to get this dynamics up to next level - will try to listen a bit more later and see if I can point you to a specific place to get this issue correct/adjust.

Cheers man,

Darek

I know what you mean, i think some things are missing in the Freq range maybe.

Ive added some more percussion, a acid line, and a extra melody layer.Let me know your thoughts . BTW, the drop is just a rough sketch right now.

Posted by TranceLover007 on Apr-25-2012 22:39:

So good step in the right direction man.

Try to use a lot more FX (for my taste) will help you create this silky atmo around your base melody.

As far as this dynamics I was previously talking about, I think I know where this problem resides - try to add another layer of a bass line with slightly different characteristic (like mid low end) and very pattern on it, not like your regular bass line when you hitting 1/16 note - if you know what I mean - this should give you a nice energy and emphasize this riff (which this track needs).

All the best man,

Darek

Posted by davidleckenby on May-01-2012 11:04:

Feedback

Hi There - just my 2c worth. I like the production and tightness. Sounds are good to me as well. I just think you need to work on a defining element(s) to take the listener somewhere different. Something that defines the track more as your style. Hope that's not too vague!..

Posted by Targus28 on May-04-2012 00:15:

finished track

Posted by Sensuerea on May-04-2012 21:31:

Man, this turned out really fking great! I love the energetic feel of this one. Honestly, I can see it being released.

One thing though, is there some clipping at 1:35 (FX maybe?) or is it just me/SC?