One of my first EDM tracks, any feedback would be highly appreciated.

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Posted by iWasHere on Jul-04-2012 04:57:

One of my first EDM tracks, any feedback would be highly appreciated.

http://soundcloud.com/iwashere/keli...-iwashere-remix

Posted by sicc on Jul-05-2012 05:54:

Mix is quite muddy, could really clean it up and progress/evolve the sounds, and address them a lot more, bring them down tighter into the mix. Cool little riffs and melodies, develop those synths, read up on mixing!

Posted by iWasHere on Jul-05-2012 06:59:

I've been looking for some honest feedback everywhere. Thank you so much for the subjective feedback. I am going to purchase some books on mixing, any recommendations?

Posted by ReclusNdangrmnt on Jul-06-2012 08:05:

It all seems a bit raw. I'd try a bit of detuning in your synths, and definitely throw down some effects, chorus and a bit of delay might help.

Posted by iWasHere on Jul-06-2012 20:53:

You guys are awesome on this forum. The synths on this track I created on reasons thor/mastrom. I will go back and add some addition fx and see how it turns out. Thanks for the input, its extremely helpful stuff.

Posted by TranceLover007 on Jul-06-2012 21:24:

Yep, sounded really dry and flat so far - you need to dress-up your sound much more then you have so far (and I can feel that you are using almost none at the moment lol) - you can start with modulation on your synts + reverb/delay/phaser and on and on......

On top of that I will try to find something attractive to add to your bass melody, some crafty sound, fancy break or else (it is totally up to you).

My $0.02

Cheers,

Darek

Posted by iWasHere on Jul-07-2012 01:46:

Thanks for the insight Darek. I will work on dressing the synths up, also thanks for the advice on the bassline. I will try to make it less repetitive. Your feedback is priceless to me. Thanks again for the tid bits guys.