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Posted by Sevari on Oct-21-2012 11:40:

Talking Avience - Wings of Air (Original mix)

Hi,

I just finished my latest Cubase production. I hope you like it.

http://soundcloud.com/avience/avienc...f-air-original

For those who haven't heard my previous production, also check out Reef.

http://soundcloud.com/avience/avience-reef-original-mix

Any commentary is appreciated!


Posted by Sevari on Oct-23-2012 21:12:

I spend a lot of hours on creating thisone. I would really like some feedback! Does anyone have some suggestions or tips?

Thanks!


Posted by Viking Pillager on Oct-25-2012 13:57:

The mix sounds pretty clean and crisp. The percs shimmer well and the synths sit in the mix well. But there's just something missing, and I think its mostly a lack of layering of percussion and fx sweeps etc to keep the ear traveling with the beat. Plus you arent automating too much in the synth sounds themselves. I would try to create a 16 bar automation circuit that completely evolves the synth leads over in a cyclical pattern (a cyclical pattern stretching the full 16bars so as to keep the listener interested).


Posted by Sevari on Oct-25-2012 19:30:

Thanks a lot for your reply. I do understand what you mean. Percussion isnt my forte yet. I will definitely work on that in my next production.

There is some automation on all the leads, but I always feel that too much automation messes up the volume levels.
Anyway, thanks. I will take your tips into consideration for my next track!


Posted by Raphie on Oct-25-2012 20:41:

good stuff, percussion is not yet there, but melodies are really nice.



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