New trance track (still working on it) - Need critics

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Posted by solarwind-ch on May-28-2013 12:22:

New trance track (still working on it) - Need critics

hello,

just a new track, I need to improve myself and for that I need some critics... What do you think of it ? What's wrong with it ? ...

https://soundcloud.com/solar-wind-ch/welcome-to-mars

Thanks