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Posted by Joule on Nov-18-2014 21:51:

I worked hard on this one.

What are your thoughts?

Posted by BOOsTER on Nov-19-2014 13:16:

Hello,
I enjoyed your track.
Some pointers, the bass and the bass drum are not well mixed together, they interfere with each other and create a very messy low end.

Then, the intro goes either for too long or needs a decent lead.

During the breakdown, I dont think the choir sounds really fit the track well, maybe try substituting them with a nice strings / supersaw...or something similar.

Or try to separate them a little bit more with EQs. Otherwise good job.

The breakdown is also a little too long for my taste, but again that might be a matter of personal preference.

One thing I learned over the years is, that while a track is perfectly nice and has some good flow and nice elements, it still needs a hook (something you could whistle along).

Keep the good work up! And please dont feel discouraged - I just ... well I mean it in a good way, youre doing fine!

Posted by Joule on Nov-22-2014 22:20:

Thanks for the criticism. You added a lot to reflect on for future tracks, I will consider some of those things that you mentioned.