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critique this amateur track

so i had a little play around with FL and this is what i came up with.

i have made one or two short tracks like this in the past. this is what i always come up with - an intro and bassline drop, basically.

i am looking for more experienced producers to critique this - on what is there, what is not, and where to go next.

using FL stutio stock sounds and a little bit of rob papen blue II.

it is just a one minutes thing, cheers

https://soundcloud.com/rubez-2/fl-1

Since nobody replies you, I will be the one to tell you the truth.

You're 5 years away from a decent track.

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Originally posted by TranceElevation You're 5 years away from a decent track.

How did you calculate that?

I'm a visioner.

Post your track to the WIP thread thats what it is there for

useless!

Maybe if you post it in the right section you'll get the right criticism.

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Originally posted by rubez useless!

Quite honestly, there's nothing to critique. It's just a beat and very little else.

It's not bad, it's not good, it just... is.

you're just being lazy/incompetent.

the bass needs limited/compressed/sidechained or something. it is clearly too much. the delayed hat could be a little less obviously delayed in the mix. so there is those two things you missed.

and since you say there is little there, you could have elaborated on what it sorely lacks - and what should follow, since i asked for that specifically... for direction.

the WIP thread just seems to be everyone blowing smoke up each others arses.

i wouldn't call this a work in progress. that implies i am going to finish it. this is more like a general brain storming fart!

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Originally posted by rubez you're just being lazy/incompetent.

Well, if you don't want to use the thread these sort of things are intended for, that's the best you're going to get.

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Originally posted by rubez the bass needs limited/compressed/sidechained or something. it is clearly too much. the delayed hat could be a little less obviously delayed in the mix. so there is those two things you missed.

What do you need anyone here for if you already know that?

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Originally posted by rubez and since you say there is little there, you could have elaborated on what it sorely lacks - and what should follow, since i asked for that specifically... for direction.

If you expect others to write your tracks for you, you need a different hobby. Or a ghost producer.

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Originally posted by rubez i wouldn't call this a work in progress. that implies i am going to finish it. this is more like a general brain storming fart!

What the fuck are you looking for then? Why should we care about your brain storming farts? Come back when you've actually got something you intend to finish, until then you can keep on whining.

such an eloquent and elaborate dissection of my post - shame you couldn't be arsed to do that with my one-minute track.

what a cock.

i think i'll listen to one of your tracks and see how well it fares...

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Originally posted by rubez such an eloquent and elaborate dissection of my post - shame you couldn't be arsed to do that with my one-minute track.

It really is a shame, isn't it?

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Originally posted by rubez what a cock.

It's massive, I know.

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Originally posted by rubez i think i'll listen to one of your tracks and see how well it fares...

It'll be available through Beatport in a few weeks

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Originally posted by rubez such an eloquent and elaborate dissection of my post - shame you couldn't be arsed to do that with my one-minute track. what a cock. i think i'll listen to one of your tracks and see how well it fares...

You can listen to them here as well as post your own for feedback:
http://tranceaddict.com/forums/show...7&forumid=48&s=

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Originally posted by Mr.Mystery It really is a shame, isn't it? It's massive, I know. It'll be available through Beatport in a few weeks

it's a 4 incher, and we all know it. you make up for the missing inches on this board

post me a link to your best track, so i can laugh at it (seriously)

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Originally posted by rubez it's a 4 incher, and we all know it. you make up for the missing inches on this board post me a link to your best track, so i can laugh at it (seriously)

You try too hard to be edgy.

i don't. just post your track please.

1. Post in the right section.

2. Its just a crappy beat, honestly what are you wanting people to say?

3. Whats wrong with a 4 incher?

Seriously, there's nothing to critique. Oonts oonts oonts oonts for the first half, then some really unpleasant thumpy bass.

rubez I don't mean to be condescending but I will just be blunt: If you don't treat others with respect and give their intentions the benefit of the doubt they will not do the same for you.

Put your best foot forward, lose the attitude and post things in the right place

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Originally posted by rubez i don't. just post your track please.

Go look at the WIP thread. The last track that Mr Mystery posted was signed to a label.

Your move.

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Originally posted by pubez i don't. just post a better track please.

shredded m8

What a cock, LOL!

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Originally posted by deegee Go look at the WIP thread. The last track that Mr Mystery posted was signed to a label. Your move.

signed to a label

do i need to point out the amount of shite that gets signed to a "label" in the digital age?

my move?

how many sales has it got?
what revenue has it gathered in monetary sums?
what known djs have played it?
where can i buy a vinyl copy?

checkmate mf.

It hasn't actually been released yet, so... yeah...

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