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Hi! yeah i know, its me again... oh well...u viewed this, its ure fault! lol..ANYHOW! u probably read my last thread askin your opinions on my music, and thank those of u who responded! :0) Well, i wanna ask another favour..
I have gathered all the critisism and ideas from here, from my website, and from my email about my music, and pretty much have summed it up into one song now... The last two album thingies i did were done too quickley... That was the major misteak i did. I got workin on a song and then before i knew it, i was rushin to get it done, cause i was bored of it, or something... and when i rush, i never do anything to the best of what i can do... and im sure that applies for everything and everyone!!! All the other songs i did like took me like 6-8 hours to finish, so this time i changed that. Ive been working on this last song for 6 days now, and have just finished about an hour ago. And according to my friend, it sounds better then the ones ive done in the past, but then again, i wanna have a general opinion so that i can see what others think :0) This time i just upped the whole song to the net so u can just download the whole thing instead of trying to listen to just samples... Well, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE tell me if u hear any improvements...thank u so much!!
---P.S. If u already read this, sorry for the wait! but i FINALLY got that damn file upped!!
---Here is the link: http://yevatmusic.webjump.com/Yevat...he%20Future.MP3
will take a listen to it soon...
i'm sure it's better than your last one. usually is when you listen to the criticism and take your time with something. hehe.
downloadin' now...12k/s...
er...it completed...but when i attempt to play it on winamp...it doesn't play....did it encode properly..? because it ain't workin'...
crap! i dunno what wrong with it, it fully uploaded, and the file on my side works.... im sure i cursed it somehow!!! is anyone else having problems listening to it?
can ya reupload it? maybe it's screwed up while transferring...is the file like 6.8 megs? cause that's how much it was for me.
this computer..AHHH! it is eactally 6.8 megs.. . i just dont understand why it wont work!...i cannot get more space to upload, cause well... i hve had NOOOO luck thisevening, lol!!! ive spent F O U R solid hours trying to upload that one song.. isnt that pathetic?... it was one thing after another! from misunderstood available space, to servers down, to the "we dont know why our company is shit" error, to the classic "crappy ISP disconnection and have to restart all over" error....LOL!!! ive had a wonderful time!! i just want someone else to tell me the file doesnt like them...so i am sure it is the file itself before spending another joy-filled four hours uploading...lol!!! but im sure thats the case! im sure my computer has a part in it not working.... my computer has this thing against me, i think it hates me... (and i swear to god, if this damn computer screws up once more, its seen its last damn connection!) anyways, SOMEONE please reply just to say if the file works for u if anything! thanx!
Has it worked yet, Lynx? if it hasnt, ill try and up it again for ya......
i tried to download it...
but a speed of 655 bytes a second is a bit too slow for me...
ADK
return of the future....
I'm downloading your song right now but the connection is very slow(3 kb/sec).
I hope it's worth waiting....
hi, i dunno why its so slow to download! its from another server, it isnt like its from my computer.. i dunno.... i hope its worth waiting for as well....lol!
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| Originally posted by Yevat Has it worked yet, Lynx? if it hasnt, ill try and up it again for ya...... |
but i'll give it another shot when i get home. hehe.
I've just heard your song.
It has a great build-up and it has a good melody.
it's defenitely better then your last song.
Thanx!! TranceManiac.. cool! ill have to spend longer times on them then :0)
ah, finally a more descent speed... 8,7k/s...
get back on this in about 15-20 minutes...
ADK
hi TranceManiac, since u see to be the only one that the file works for...LOL!... what else do i need to add to the song to make it better?... i'll take all the ideas i can get!
i listened it (twice)
i think this is quite a good song
not TOO good, but it's something i couldnt do
i think you should try to think of a very catch melody, not a five-second-melody that gets repeated all the time, but a bit longer, variation in tones, and tunes is important too, i think
oh yeah, after about 2 minutes, the musci completely stops, and after 10 seconds or so, a sort of little build-up begins
those 10 seconds are too long or too quiet, i dont know, but at first i thought i had put up the volume of my pcspeakers or something because i didnt hear anything
but it does have some dance-potential
ADK
lol. okay okay, i'm gonna redownload it again...hehe.
thanx!! well as for the melody... the next song im gonna do (well remake) is an older song i did called "dawn" listen to the melody on the website ( http://www.envy.nu/musicyevat ) is that the kind of melody ure talking about?... and i understand about the silence part, ive been thinking that i should have made that shorter and hopped bits like that out... know what ya mean! thanx again!! :0)
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| Originally posted by Yevat thanx!! well as for the melody... the next song im gonna do (well remake) is an older song i did called "dawn" listen to the melody on the website ( http://www.envy.nu/musicyevat ) is that the kind of melody ure talking about?... and i understand about the silence part, ive been thinking that i should have made that shorter and hopped bits like that out... know what ya mean! thanx again!! :0) |
in that case, the next song, ill try and make it as different as possible! lol! ill try and make a unique melody which is different from all my others ;0)
I'm downloading it now 11 mins left to wait...
I wanna see if I can help.
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Right i've listened to it twice and I have to say I quite like this one. Everything fits together nicely and the melody (although simple) is good. The only thing that I didn't like about it was the couple of silences through the song. Maybe they should be shorter or if there is some instrument(s) playing quietly thay should be made louder.
But all in all it's a nice piece of work!
What did you use to make this track?
thanx! well ure the second person to say something about the quiet bits... and after u ppl said it, ive listened and ure completelty right.. they need to go... im gonna get rid of them, and rebuild the mp3 and ill try and up the file again for ya's :0) and what i made it with, was Fruityloops3... i love that proggy! brb, fixing the silence!
great.... i got started, now i can stop fuckin about with shit! lol!! im like changing all the hats,hits, bass...and so on as well as the silences.... i knew this would happen... well, guess ull get this song later on then, not as soon as i intended!!!!
heheh, okee. i look forward to hearing the new track. you can call it (whatever the name is) (take 2) hehehe.
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