New uplifting track needs your opinion

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Posted by DeZmA on Nov-24-2002 11:22:

New uplifting track needs your opinion

hi all,

this is my latest track.. I'm waiting to buy a pc but meanwhile i pushed my mc 505 again to it's sequence limit and this is what came out:

right click on the file and click save as
http://users.pandora.be/dezma/Dezma-Promo2.mp3

It is NOT finished, it still needs a lot of mastering and it's recorded way too quiet

Any comment is welcome
thx

Posted by DeZmA on Nov-25-2002 19:22:

Fixed the volume problem a bit..
Don't overwhelm me with replys, one at a time plz

Posted by Icone on Nov-25-2002 19:46:

downloading now, i'll be back later

Posted by 531.am on Nov-25-2002 21:31:

d/l now brb

Posted by Icone on Nov-26-2002 14:58:

It sounded ok to me, more or less... The melody isn't exactly what i would call cheer uplifting trance, but it can go by it... just
Synth sounds are ok, but the drums need more work I think. Perhaps a different melody with these synths would make it really uplifting

Good job so far, keep on working on it buddy
Wim

Posted by DeZmA on Nov-26-2002 15:56:

thx for your review wim,

what exactly do you dislike in the melody? I worked a lot on it and it was hard work to sequence it playing realtime. Anyway I appreciate your honesty

Posted by oDrori on Nov-26-2002 17:36:

Nice work, begins a bit boring IMO, melody is pretty nice, don't like the way the bass kicks in after the breakdown though... I don't know if you meant to achieve this but you have a pretty floaty and mixed up choon there!

Posted by Fatboy on Nov-28-2002 16:57:

I really like the melody of this one. A very nice blend of a sad and happy progression. But it does need some serious mastering I feel. The kick is much louder than the other elements, and the rest sounds kind of "mushy"(don't know if that's a word). With some better mixing and mastering this could be great

Peace

Posted by trancedfarmer on Nov-29-2002 16:09:

good song. i like the melody personally, its well thought out.

Posted by DeZmA on Nov-30-2002 19:30:

thx for reviews,
fatboy I'm glad you felt the emotion in the melody.. I know it's in need of mastering (melody is way too quiet too) but I just don't have the right equipment to do that right now .. But I'll certainly redo the track when I have a decent studio mixer and pc.

Posted by Haak on Nov-30-2002 21:11:

Very nice tune, but I agree with Fatboy
Looking foward to hearing it with better mastering