My second production ! Feedback pls

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Posted by dEEkAy on Dec-25-2002 20:05:

My second production ! Feedback pls

Hi everyone

I finished my 2nd production today.

Here's the full track (untitled yet )

Opinions are welcome.

http://users.pandora.be/chuanweb/mu...ay-untitled.mp3

Posted by arturob on Dec-25-2002 20:13:

heh.

Posted by Endre on Dec-25-2002 20:43:

hmmm....end is werd.....hmmm, don't know what to say about this, is this your 2d track,...of all time? or 2d "single"?

Posted by dEEkAy on Dec-25-2002 22:07:

2nd own production (not inc. remixes)

Posted by Flotser on Dec-27-2002 21:21:

I like it...

I Also like the melodyes... The melody at 3:50 sounds femiliar to me, dont know from where... (matbe i already download your track before )..

again, cool melodic track.

Posted by Lira on Dec-29-2002 00:05:

I like the title It's good (specially for a 2nd tune, so I suppose you're beginning now)... sounds like pvd, but... hhhmm... try to make it less "happy", you know what I mean? My first tunes were quite happy too, so I found a way to know whether the melody is too happy or not. Everytime I compose a new melody, I ask to myself: Does it feel like I'm dancing with Mickey Mouse and Donald Duck? If not, I go on with it Got the idea?

Posted by teknasia on Dec-29-2002 12:10:

quote:
Originally posted by Maaz
Everytime I compose a new melody, I ask to myself: Does it feel like I'm dancing with Mickey Mouse and Donald Duck? If not, I go on with it Got the idea?

nice track
really reminds me at PvD

Posted by Lakeus on Dec-29-2002 18:58:

Pretty nice... the bass should be much, much louder, also I think that you should change at some point the sound which plays the chords at the back, it would bring more depth to the track. Nice effort for your second track!

Best regards, Lakeus
www.mp3.com/lakeus

Posted by Mod1 on Dec-29-2002 23:17:

you have talent my friend. the only advice i can give is work on your mix and production more. if you are still beginning at this it will get better every track you do anyway. the only other thing is try to be a bit more original and not clone pvd.

Posted by dEEkAy on Dec-30-2002 01:09:

doh...I didnt think of PvD when producing this

Posted by benfica88 on Dec-30-2002 04:18:

quote:
Originally posted by dEEkAy
doh...I didnt think of PvD when producing this

rofl...nice track btw.