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Posted by dbl on Jan-16-2003 03:08:

projecct - 7th angel

have made a new track and would love some comments on it to improve myself

HERE it is (rightclick/save as)

Posted by Flotser on Jan-16-2003 09:52:

Hello!!

I love the Begining, also love the bassline!! (is it ok to do the bass line on so high frequences?)
The percisuin is also great!!
The main synth 2:00... its cool, but i guess that darker synth would fit better in that dark track
2:40....you fade the synth to to low volume i guess

angain, overall, the track is great, but the main melody seems maybe simple, ant too happy...just an aprerigator playng some notes, but again, i think with darker synth it will sound better.
4:30 ... love that athmospere!

Posted by dbl on Jan-16-2003 12:31:

quote:
Originally posted by Flotser
Hello!!

I love the Begining, also love the bassline!! (is it ok to do the bass line on so high frequences?)
The percisuin is also great!!
The main synth 2:00... its cool, but i guess that darker synth would fit better in that dark track
2:40....you fade the synth to to low volume i guess

angain, overall, the track is great, but the main melody seems maybe simple, ant too happy...just an aprerigator playng some notes, but again, i think with darker synth it will sound better.
4:30 ... love that athmospere!

thank's.. i was thinking about the bass too, but i hope it's ok
will fix the fading later today.. thank's for the tip.

the melodie might seem a bit simple, but that was the best i could come up with atm.. i have no inspiration at all when it comes to melodies... might just have a bad time atm
and it's not an aprerigator (or how it is spelt).. i have done the notes myself...

thank's for the comments.. much appreciated

Posted by dbl on Jan-18-2003 20:37:

anyone more??? 30 looks 1 post

Posted by Icone on Jan-19-2003 16:03:

Downloading it now mate, but the server it very slow...

I'll be back once I have it, I promise

Greetz,
Wim/LW

Edit : finally I got it
I really liked the intro and fx you used, they're nice. Basslines fits well too. Good atmosphere that builds. But I don't really like its melody... sorry
All the rest is very fine, only the melody could be more interesting, or some twists to it perhaps.

Keep up the good work!

Posted by dbl on Jan-22-2003 03:41:

quote:
Originally posted by Lightworks
Downloading it now mate, but the server it very slow...

I'll be back once I have it, I promise

Greetz,
Wim/LW

Edit : finally I got it
I really liked the intro and fx you used, they're nice. Basslines fits well too. Good atmosphere that builds. But I don't really like its melody... sorry
All the rest is very fine, only the melody could be more interesting, or some twists to it perhaps.

Keep up the good work!

thank's alot wim....
i have a serious problem with melodies atm.. no inspiration at all
i tryied to do something more with it, but everything just went straight to hell so i keept it like that... might redo it someday with a better melodie.. if i get some inspiration that is

but i'm glad you liked the rest