HELLO!! ive been workin on a song for 2 weeks now..... and guess what?? ive came to bug u again! lol! i want critisism again!! ill keep askin for critisism until i improve on what ever i need to improve on so i cant get anymore critisism!! HA!... ok, that made no sense.. oh well... here is da clip

too fast for my liking..ask someone thats into the harder stuff! ill give it a 5

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Critisism u want huh?.. u suck1!!!! heheh j/k

damm he told you! maybe you should do what he does and stick with dvd's!!!

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The main keyboard sound and rhythm (1,2,3,...1,2,3) is boring and monotonous. I like the break and the BPM though, good work. Spice that keyboard up a bit with a cleaner, aural (rise and fall) sound. Try that for now...if you want more criticism...I'll be here.

yeah spread that beat out a little bit!

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hi, thanx! ok then! i shall try and do that

Fuck man !!!!!! nice synths. I aint got no problem with the speed. Very nice... and after it goes all mellow with the sysnth..... u really need to build it up progressively till theres a climax....... then this could KICK total ass

good luck

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"Many trances so produced are dangerous, because you can get lost in them. The reason is that the multiple trances can become fixed - relatively permanent - and one stays more or less always in a trance. That is an addictive trance."

hey thanx! well right now im actually workin on that bit.. im gonna put some crap int background that has a slow filter sweep to it...hopefully that will work

good luck with it :-)

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"Many trances so produced are dangerous, because you can get lost in them. The reason is that the multiple trances can become fixed - relatively permanent - and one stays more or less always in a trance. That is an addictive trance."

Sounds like Happy Hardcore to me!

hello! here is what it sounds like so far... the new version: