The soul inside is weakoning.
The hell outside grows stronger.
As it is my heart is still beating.
How can i stand the pain any longer.
Soon my soul will eject.
Soon the feelings no one will suspect.
As i will be without a soul within me.
I'll walk about with nothing.
Able to go in and nothing to go out.
The more i think of it the more i feel i'll be a lot better off just dieng.

my love is a leaf
torn as by a first gentle lover,
from the branch.

Tumbling, wumbling,
Summer Salting,
she shimmies through the bright afternoon,
whirling past a world of
wearily falling sheets
of rain and
maybe a feather or two float by.

Soon, she will plonk
into a puddle… ;
concentricting ripples
of her love.


shitty poetry rocks.

BUT THEY DONT RHYME

LAMERS !

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Originally posted by DJ Robby Rox I've never had a problem with FLs tech support till this day. (I've actually never used it till this day)

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Originally posted by floyd741 i think echosystm is a pretty cool guy. eh pwns robby rox and doesn't afraid of anything.

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Originally posted by echosystm BUT THEY DONT RHYME LAMERS !

dude, not all poems are sposed 2 rhyme, makes the cheeser if they do half the time

lol i cant believe you took me seriously

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Originally posted by DJ Robby Rox I've never had a problem with FLs tech support till this day. (I've actually never used it till this day)

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Originally posted by floyd741 i think echosystm is a pretty cool guy. eh pwns robby rox and doesn't afraid of anything.

My love is like a piece of beef
Eaten with a side of potatoes like so many others
Living on a dude ranch

Taintstain, faintstain
Winter Wanking
I wish she would gimmie a piece of that poon
Walking down a lane with
Slowly drying circles
of brown cowpies and
maybe a dead skunk or a shrew lay nigh

Soon I will donk
into a rock
wanting her nipples
and saying it was love


I wear red socks.

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Robots, machines, mechanical beings
Automatic and synthetic, we have the means
To take control of this planet and the human race
With our electronic rhythms and the Armageddon Bass

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Originally posted by echosystm lol i cant believe you took me seriously

~shrug~ hehe, well... what can i say, im special...ed

Only true poets can write a good poem. People nowadays use a personification here and there mixed with the grievance of whatever it is they thought of while being upset because MTV didn't play a certain music video.

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Originally posted by ierxium Only true poets can write a good poem. People nowadays use a personification here and there mixed with the grievance of whatever it is they thought of while being upset because MTV didn't play a certain music video.

oddly, that reminded me of a dream i had with a brick

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Originally posted by citric_acid oddly, that reminded me of a dream i had with a brick

A brick. Wow, please elaborate...

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Roses are red,
Violets are blue
Some poems rhyme
And others don't.

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[ Romans Chapter 1, Verse 6: And you are included among those Gentiles who have been called to belong to Jesus Christ. ]

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Originally posted by ierxium A brick. Wow, please elaborate...

i was hiding from something, and kept seeing a brick, there were helicopters and everything, weird dream, but the brick folowed me everywhere