ur too kind on my boring shit.

great wip, really enjoy that ambitious bass at the latter part, maybe if the resonant peaks were even higher on it, it could be more hooky methinks.

just spitballing, maybe some mixed reverb on the rimshot could be beneficial as seems a bit static, same with the piano. other than that hats off i enjoy.

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Originally posted by szm ur too kind on my boring shit. great wip, really enjoy that ambitious bass at the latter part, maybe if the resonant peaks were even higher on it, it could be more hooky methinks. just spitballing, maybe some mixed reverb on the rimshot could be beneficial as seems a bit static, same with the piano. other than that hats off i enjoy.

Thanks Bud! Appreciate the feedback. That back side Reese is still in development. I am not to fond of the design work and left it as a placeholder until I can re develop it as the intention is to transition into a Dancefloor style D&B Bass line from the "ambience" of the static Sub from the Liquid side.

Percussion is next! I agree, that Shot could use a little verb.
Piano's are actually very deep and layered immensely. I am sure you will get that resonance once I EQ.

I would ask if you don't mind.
The chord changes on the second bars are most obviously...odd; tonally
is it too odd?
Am I getting enough punch on the ending kick/percussion? Seems thin and maybe it's because I am not giving enough intensity to the drop before it that makes it seem lethargic

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thats above my wheelhouse, sorry brother. thought your kick was clipping but i think that was piano.

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So far I like Storyteller - 071-beatje - nice dynamics and melody line.

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Updated the one I've been working on past few days in between work, family and Final Fantasy 16

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really nice piece, reminds of me some royksopp for some reason. got that punchy dry sound I cant achieve. no critical feedback I can give.

I havent opened a daw in ages, did so today and this came out.



poopy mix, whole things needs a tilt. the track itself is pretty anemic. done in demo mode so I can only do 1 session lol. the bass needs to be better, the main lead is probably scrap worthy, not sure what I was thinking.

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