The vocal sample is out of tune. It might be worth your while to look into Antares Auto tune or to re-record the vocal.
Also, you need more delay, and yes, the reverb is a bit off.
As well, the mix seems to be a bit too "simple". Maybe add more percs or something, it just seems like it needs to be thickened out.
Lastly, the lyrics are a bit generic I think, but that might be the style you're going for.
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