My first ; is this ripped? :P

Had this melo in my head today, dont know if its a ripoff or not, Ive seen that u guys know much about trance here

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no it is not a rip-off, it sounds awful thought.. but nice try for a first time.. sounds very alike to the commercial vocal trance riffs imo...

unintentional ripps does NOT accur very often..

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yeah the leadsound sucks :P and yeah im trying to learn how to make music its my second thing I try to make

It isnt a ripoff. In my opinion, you should try to make the lead less variation, not so many ups and downs. If you know what i mean..
Keep up the good work! Good Luck.

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