The entire track sounds like you cut the whole low-end off. The bass drum sounds like a click and there just doesn't seem to be any bass at all.
As for the track itself... well, I've heard far worse first efforts. You seem to know how to build a club track but the technical side is lacking. Then again, for a first track I wouldn't really expect anything else.
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Latest releases:
Endless Cycles [Capital Heaven]
The Charlatan [Morphosis]
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