Hey everyone, I have a unfinished track with a melody that I think is killer. The only thing is It's not finished . I have an old p3 which can't play it without alot of crackling and popping. Also my mastering skills aren't good yet as i'm concentrating more on song structure, plus i mix with 20 dollar earbuds which is really sad. I'm gettin a new pc and monitors and a mia soundcard by years end, but I was wondering if anyone out there wants to collaborate with me and help me finish this track. Someone with experience and a good setup.

here is the link to the tune:

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/n...quiredmusic.htm

you can add me to msn : [email protected][/email]

or email me : [email][email protected]

peace

it really sounds like dumonde somehow, bassline could be much better but melody and other sounds are professional sounds.

Trancevision

Last edited by Trancevision on Nov-01-2003 at 01:29

yeah the bassline is very bland, needs more movement, but thats why i want to collaborate with someone, get ideas, work as team like alot of producers do.

like trancevision said, the bass needs some work.. could be alot better.. otherwise it sounds really nice

That's good dude. Everyone here talks about the bass but I don't know. I think it fits in quite well. If you listen to "never look back", you'll find they used a very similar bassline in that and its effective.

Keep it up.

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I'm not a big fan of Dumonde.I just respect Dumonde But your track is well done.I don't know if it's nornmal,but I hear the kick more on the right in my headphones.

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The kick seems to be centered to me. I only panned the hi hats to the left and right. i have no clue why the kuck seems to be panned to you. Thanks for the comments peace