Hi there!

I'am here for the first time, so i tell something about myself. My real name is Dominik, i came from Katowice (Poland), and I was born in 1988...

I want to invite You to give me some marks for my last trance production - Unblended Mind. Also if You can give me some advices, I will be thankful.

http://www.silver.audioshot.net/lee...d_mind_demo.mp3

Greetz!

Last edited by Lee Silver on Sep-23-2004 at 18:47

I see the good job!!!!
This is my climat, and i waiting for full track.

Peace, Love & God

Sunclyder

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wow... this is pretty good for a guy so young! kinda reminds me of '99 style trance! like to hear a better sample with all the synthlines working together... given the short sample - great work so far!

I don't really like hats in the beginning. They're way too spastic.

At 1:06 The jump into that breakdown was waaaaay too fast. Ease me into that synth a little more slowly.

To be honest, it sounds kinda like it could be any other trance song at this point. But we all have to start somewhere before developing our own style, so I'll give you the benefit of the doubt.

ah, another young one hehe
first off, id lower the BPM on this , kinda sounds like rave music the way it is now, put it to 140 id say
anyways what u got so far is pretty good , a little push / rank 1
very oldschool break and build
i like it actually, considering ur so young and havent experienced the oldschool trance, im surprised u came up with this hehe
congrats,
keep up the good work
peace out

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This is a nice tune. Liking what i hear in this sample. But would like to hear the full version to give a better critic of it. Anywho I left you a pm.

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